why must sasuke die?! poor sakura!!

You told me about this a year ago, and I'm sorry that it's only now that I'm reviewing (you know I'm horrible at keeping tabs).

I think you did a great job with this piece. I especially like your characterization of Neji in the 4th paragraph, where you focused on how teammates are not supposed to abandon teammates even for the sake of completing the mission. I really think Neji would not be that kind of narrow-minded shinobi, even if he gives off that vibe (mission > comrades vibes) at times.

These are so sad. It does explain what happened in Casualties of War better. I like them, great job!

Woohoo! It's finished! Now, I don't remember whether or not Ino died in your story...I hope she didn't. But anyway, I liked this chapter a lot and it was a nice ending.

There was one place where you used "where" instead of "were". I think it was when Ino asked Shikamaru whether he had been sleeping or not. Just thought I'd offer some help, just like all the typos you've corrected for me.

Great fic, and I'm glad that I read it!

Chapter 4 Review:

Poor Ino ;.; That was really sad.
You did a great job though. It was very entertaining :)
Write more fics asap :D

You did a great job!
Go write more multi-chaptered stories! =D

Gah! This was so sad! Like the others, but different. I actually felt bad for Sakura, and Sasuke, and I'm not particularly fond of Sakura. Good job, and I can't wait for Shika and Ino!

So sad, but so sweet. Nice job!

Goodness, the first one was sad enough, but now we hear about how they were before some of them died! This was really good, though.

i liked and i cant wait to read about shikamaru and ino
see you later

aw sad...if only sakura heard the sound nin and kicked their sorry asses back to the sound...nice ff keep it up :D

This is sad.

But I really liked it! It was very well written.

...I made up a sister for Shikamaru. She's interesting.

Continue!

I'm so sad now!! I'm gonna cry...
I love the story though, great jon Kata-chan!

so sad i'm gonna cry
get stuffed susuke you heartless teme

NEJI! TENTEN! NO!
That sucks *sniffle*.

Oh well at least Naru-Chan is alright. And Hina-Chan :D.
*victory dance*

SASUSAKU NEXT! YAY!! Please don't make them die. I've had enough heartbreak with poor Neji and Tenten D:

Anyway, update son!