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| The Reading Maid 2008-01-04 ch 4,  | abuseWoohoo! It's finished! Now, I don't remember whether or not Ino died in your story...I hope she didn't. But anyway, I liked this chapter a lot and it was a nice ending. There was one place where you used "where" instead of "were". I think it was when Ino asked Shikamaru whether he had been sleeping or not. Just thought I'd offer some help, just like all the typos you've corrected for me. Great fic, and I'm glad that I read it! |
| Kaoru-Hime 2008-01-04 ch 4, | abuseChapter 4 Review: Poor Ino ;.; That was really sad. You did a great job though. It was very entertaining :) Write more fics asap :D |
| Sapphire Luna 2008-01-04 ch 4, | abuseYou did a great job! Go write more multi-chaptered stories! =D |
| The Reading Maid 2007-11-30 ch 3, | abuseGah! This was so sad! Like the others, but different. I actually felt bad for Sakura, and Sasuke, and I'm not particularly fond of Sakura. Good job, and I can't wait for Shika and Ino! |
| The Reading Maid 2007-11-30 ch 2, | abuseSo sad, but so sweet. Nice job! |
| The Reading Maid 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseGoodness, the first one was sad enough, but now we hear about how they were before some of them died! This was really good, though. |
| Daxo 2007-10-03 ch 3, | abusei liked and i cant wait to read about shikamaru and ino see you later |
| sakurakickssasukesass 2007-09-19 ch 3, | abuseaw sad...if only sakura heard the sound nin and kicked their sorry asses back to the sound...nice ff keep it up :D |
| iflip4dolphins 2007-09-11 ch 3, | abuseThis is sad. But I really liked it! It was very well written. ...I made up a sister for Shikamaru. She's interesting. Continue! |
| Kaoru-Hime 2007-09-09 ch 3, | abuseI'm so sad now!! I'm gonna cry... I love the story though, great jon Kata-chan! |
| contestshipper 2007-09-08 ch 3, | abuseso sad i'm gonna cry get stuffed susuke you heartless teme |
| LazyBumForever 2007-08-23 ch 2, | abuseNEJI! TENTEN! NO! That sucks *sniffle*. Oh well at least Naru-Chan is alright. And Hina-Chan :D. *victory dance* SASUSAKU NEXT! YAY!! Please don't make them die. I've had enough heartbreak with poor Neji and Tenten D: Anyway, update son! |
| Silver Warrior 2007-08-23 ch 2, | abusenice! Was hoping for a side story or continuation (C2's are wonderufl, ne? Found both of these in my regular C2 updates!). Man, I really feel for Neji, losing Tenten. And that was nice, seeing Naruto and Hinata work together. |
| iflip4dolphins 2007-08-22 ch 2, | abusePoor Naruto and Hinata. Continue! Please? |
| Rebellia 2007-08-22 ch 2, | abuseHm...war. They're good. I like them, the NejiTen one is the best I think. |