It was beautiful!~
I love all of your work!! (:

i like it when you described naruto as the sun and sasuke as the moon

“You…you have the sun,” Hinata says with a bittersweet smile.

Muttering Sakura replies, “And you have the moon.”


LOVE the line!

Short, but I like the idea in this story quite a lot (the contrast between the sun and moon imagery is very fitting, and the idea about unbreakable bonds of friendship being the most important thing is very naruto-ish). It really would be nice to see more Sakura-Hinata friendship in the show (really, more interactions between the kunochi would be great), but I suppose given the genre it's not to be. (If Naruto was shoujo? I think what you've written would be completely plausible).

That was beautiful, completely magnificent. I've never seen this idea before, I love that you kept Hinata and Sakura frineds the way you did. The sun and moon were also wonderful descriptions, I love your insight.

This Was So Beautiful I HAD To Comment.Yes,Unrequited Love IS Difficult.

But It Was The Sun & The Moon But Which Made Me Sniffle A Little.

And,Yes,I Agree With Friendship Being Important.

Gorgeous.

Aw tat was a kool oneshot story i LOVED IT! well im happy at least hinata got sasuke ^^ love the story cause it was sweet and awesome
at first i thought it was going to b a sasusaku n i was like aw man y does it have to b tat pairing (no offense but i jus like sasuhina more xD) but i was so happy at the end wen sasuke felt a little feeling towards her and they might try out a relationship together tat was so KOL!! and jus KAWAII!

...So...So sweet TT.TT You really described their feelings well. Especially the whole "You have the sun" and "You have the moon" thing was great, because... It's so true. Naruto is like a shining sun, and Sasuke a silvery moon... -shiny eyes-

Love the premise! To draw from canon, from Sakura loving Sasuke, Naruto loving Sakura, Hinata loving Naruto, then simply having Sasuke fall for Hinata. Genius. I've always thought that since Hinata was the only girl in Konoha who didn't even notice the heartthrob, she would be the perfect girl to pique his interest...

I also liked the fact that you made this between the girls. While shonen is, indeed meant for guys, it's just depressing how few female characters there are in shonen manga who have interesting stories.

“You…you have the sun,” Hinata says with a bittersweet smile.
Muttering Sakura replies, “And you have the moon.”

Unrequited love is painful but they both know that losing a friend is worst.
So that’s why…
…they try.

Um, hello? Allow me to bow down and worship the ground you walk on! No seriously, I love those two parts. It just...hit me really hard. I love this story, and I'm certain so many other people agree. Not only is it unbelievably well-written (again, those moments...!) but it just flows and flows and comes together so nicely! For once, I'm actually reading the author's notation and nodding my head and agreeing. There is a lot to be found in Sakura and Hinata's relationship.

Wonderful, marvelous. Never seen anything quite like it. xD
Lux,
Dreamz

Wonderfully made. Short, I must say, but good. I love their analogies. Great work!

~Lian

bittersweet...

Aw, this is great :D

you did great on this story its true on what you said too

I have always liked the idea of frienship between Hinata and Sakura, I liked it.

Oh, its so sad. I do wish you'd continue. It's quite lovely and I thank you for it. So thank you.

-C. Twilight