wow that was amazing, I loved it and the twist at the end with Lorne having seen it all from her singing was really shocking, nicely done and you write both Illyria and Spike really well

Nice,I'm very impressed.

This was absolutely fabulous. The twist at the end was just perfectly done. This line "Her voice is ashes and brimstone, the scent of ozone and burning flesh, and when she speaks, the blue of her lips is stained with blood," was just breathtaking.

I really like the fact that you can write solidly in present tense without hopping back and forth between the present and the past tenses, which I always find very off-putting. So well done, I'm very impressed.

A great story. Very good.

Wow! This is - well, for lack of a better word, apocalyptic! I love it. Very good characterization of Illyria.

Holy crap. Words cannot describe how incredible this story is...

I loved it :)

Very well written!

That was very well done. I love how you made Fred's memories part of Ilyria's present. The Fegenbaum mention was too sad.

Very cool. I liked this a lot.