ah, it's been a while since I've first read this, and it gives me chills each time. The last line I suppose, and a few in the middle just hit me hard and I love that.
Beautiful writing, interesting choice of writing also.

this is beautiful... ^.^peaceV

i loved this.

That was SO amazing.
Beautiful. (no pun intended)

You're a great writer. I hope you know that(:
Keep writing!

You, my friend, are a very touching author. That was deep, not just deep, like deep-deep, abyss deep kind of deep, ya know? LOL, yeah, I was babling for a second. XD But if it makes sense to you, then yeah, go me!

Great story!

Please r and r my story! (Warmth In The Dark by Sasunaru-tears)

Thx!

Aww, this is so beautiful. I didn't see any flaws what so ever. I loved it. xD

its very interesting. And very true.

I love it.

My God, that was gorgeous.

Love it so much!! Very great, and just so... beautiful...

Pretty...
C:

AH, I liked this, very introspective. Nicely done.

This story is beautiful :)