Loved it.

Awesome, and I love the part where he asks her if she trusts him. Just cute. Nice work!

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Aw, how romantical. Franny's so cute even when her slightly insane son interrupts her moping. Cornelius is AWESOME for that gift. That is quite possibly the best gift ever. EVER.

so sweet! I loved the proposal. XD

This story was so cute that cute and adorable can't even cover it. I love it!

very cute! i love how he took her back in time, very romantic!

so cute its was great

This is a pretty awesome story. I like the path that you took with this one. I hope you don't mind me "borrowing" part of it, as I want to base my chapter of "Building a Family" that includes Lewis and Franny getting married to include this proposal scene. I will of course reference you in my AN. If you'd rather I didn't, it'll be a bit before I get that chapter posted, so will be happy to change it, if necessary.

Good work on this story.

Everybody go "Aw"!

This. Was. Too. Cute. -

With that said, it really was adorable, In-Character. I also don't think the idea of Franny being able to sing was too far-fetched either.

I just love this to death, though I noticed one TINSEY error.

“Okay then I’ll stay and listen. Wait you said he forgot? Dad? That doesn’t sound like him. Usually the two of you are all mushy gushy. I’m all in favor of a happy marriage, but seriously, it can get pretty gross.” Wilbur shuttered a little.

Shuttered, should be shuddered.

(I originally noticed because the line amused me so much that I re-read it. XD)

Great job, (as usual).

- The Brunette Bookworm

Dang, I cried.

So beautiful, him taking her to the day he proposed. So, so beautiful! -wipes away tear-

“I’ll probably regret this….what’s wrong mom?”

Aw! So sweet! Loved it! I remember reading this on LJ...

Robin