 Marlstripe BlueBlade 2009-12-16 . chapter 26LOLOLOL! I LV THIS FIC!! |
 Marlstripe BlueBlade 2009-12-16 . chapter 1HEY! THIS WAS THE 1ST REDWALL FIC I EVER READ & IT WAS AWESOME JUST AWESOME! O YEA, HI FOX-KEL! WE LV U & FERRET-KEL! XD |
 MetallicTaste 2009-12-02 . chapter 23I am very afraid that I must tie two competitors (it doesnt matter because im AGES too late)
Bluefen (beserky girl)
and
Dotti (good fighter)
tie!! for first. GRAWR |
 MetallicTaste 2009-12-02 . chapter 8I know its a bit late, but Singing
challenge winner: Rose (I love beautifully erie stuff like Memories by Within Temptation)
Loser: Bluefen (There is a confidence drop off- Dotti sang terrible yet sang loud and proud. Bluefen was a good singer, but sang quietly) |
 StarlightDragon1636 2009-11-27 . chapter 32well don't take to long now okay? this will be intrsting. so when does Cluny make his entrance as a judge? why not make him a suprise for the defender during the seige? |
 warrior4 2009-10-09 . chapter 32Rector: *to Ferret-Kel* Don't worry buddy, no one will ever be able to replace you.
Ferret Kel: Well thank you, nice to be appriciated.
Rector: Well there's that, and it's still funny to see your accordian impression whenever an anvil lands on your head. *grins wickedly*
Ferret Kel: *looks skyward* Why me?
Nice to see this coming along. I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out. I've got a theory as to which team will do better, but who knows. This looks to get interesting real quick like. |
 Oreramar 2009-10-07 . chapter 32Good to meet you Fox-Kel.
There. Now that that little pleasantry is aside, I need to make something clear to you.
Kalyn can take care of herself, I know. Do something she doesn't like, and you'll be given the iciest shoulder you've ever seen. Keep pushing, and you will be in real physical pain, both from her reaction...
And from mine.
Got it memorized?
...
Good. I'm glad we have an understanding, then.
:)
On another note, I would like to say that there is a friend of my family who is male and named Kelly. Really. He is Kelly - no longer version or anything. So, Kelaiah, you don't really have to feel bad about the name.
And no fox understudy will ever replace our ferret Kel.
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The teams seem well-constructed. At this point, I cannot guess which one will win.
So, I'll leave it at that.
Eagerly looking forward to more, as always! |
 Jarrtail 2009-10-07 . chapter 32Man, understudies are a handful, aren't they? Well, at least if Ferret-Kel dies in soem horrible lazer-related accident, you have someone to fall back to.
This chapter was rather short, actually, and about a third was Sable Quean info. Not that I have any problem with that, but if we're going to wait so long for a chapter, I would personally like to see more bang for my buck, so to speak. Nothing is wrong with this chapter, per se, but it seemed like you pulled out a bit too early. Funny, nevertheless.
-Jarrtail |
 icefox425 2009-10-07 . chapter 32I like plotholes ^^. I also like the smell of coffee, but I have to mix it with hot chocolate to drink it, since it is not very sweet.
Hm, a mole warrior, my friend Foremole Doni will like that. She hates hedgehogs and hares, but loves moles (isn't she strange?)...Wow, Kelly actually thought you were dating Nonny and Kayln. I haven't been reading your fics for more than a year, but I still don't know where he got that assumption. Ew pretty much sums it up.
A great fic as always!
-Icefox425 =) |
 Aris Dalton 2009-10-07 . chapter 32Those were good choices for the teams. Excellent chapter, although Fox-Kelly is starting to annoy me. |
 Silhouette The SANVAE 2009-10-07 . chapter 32OMYGODOMYGODOMYGOD! THE SABLE QUEAN?!?!?!?!?! NO FRIKKING WAY! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! EP! *gasps* Warrior... mole?!?! YES!! *does a victory pose*
Hmm... It works rather well for the Council. How long have you had this idea? =D Because it works wonderfully.
Hey, personally, I loved Mariel's outburst! It was great! XD
Kelly... Uh... Want a hug? (To Ferret-Kel: Get some of the maids to hug him. He might not complain about not getting any love or attention then. ~_^)
YAY for updates, man!! =D =D =D =D =D You updated much faster than I expected... ^_^
- Sil |
 Much Ado About Nonny 2009-10-06 . chapter 32I'm actually quite surprised that Kelly didn't mention Ara as one of Kel's "girlfriends." Then again, he's probably learned the hard way that that's not a good idea...portable guillotine's better than electroshock therapy.
But that's just what I need: yet ANOTHER crazed, skinny malebeast in a hula skirt hitting on my alter ego. Just wait until Newo finds out...
Personally, I might have liked to see a few more of the contestants votes, but, then again, that *would* have been hard to write, and it might have made the chapter drag. So, kudos, you did well.
Eh...to me, the whole Ublaz/Vilaya ship is looking like another Nagru/Silvamord in the making. I'd advise him to stay with Atunra...or at least try hitting on Ara, because, surely, he'd prefer a quick death to a long, angsty, argument-filled one.
Yes, I'm being sarcastic. Sorry...been spending too much time reading Catwoman/Batman ficlets. Great chapter, looking forward to the next one. |
 FireHawk43 2009-09-29 . chapter 31"They're just OCs created solely for this challenge, so it won't matter so much if they get killed off"
Lol. |
 Greenwoodswierdo 2009-09-27 . chapter 31Oh my. Poor Dandin. (No offense. I hope none is taken, Nonny.) Come to think of it, poor everyone. I am a HUGE Mariel/Dandin FREAK! DO NOT MOCK THEM! *whispers in surprisingly small voice* sorry. |
 icefox425 2009-09-20 . chapter 31Yay, you've updated ^^
Poor Nonny, she didn't get to kiss Dandin, and got beat up by Mariel,too. Must've not've been her day.
Hm, a tall, skinny,bespectaled, male fox, and a tall, skinny, bespectaled, male ferret...strange how you two are so alike.
Bluefen might be a good spy, since she won the Disguise Yourself Like Vermin contest, but maybe not. Armel used to be an Infirminary Keeper, so she probably will be a Imfirminary Sister.
Even slow updates are better than quitting a story. :)
~Icefox425 |
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