 mizgardenia21 2009-10-26 . chapter 3This story is really interesting and different. I like it. I think the plot is decent. |
 FluffyBiscuits 2009-05-23 . chapter 3Stunned you updated. Not a huge fan of this pairing but you write so well. |
 The Illustrious Crackpot 2009-05-12 . chapter 3Hooray, Commander's not dead! :D Don't worry about frequent (or infrequent) updates; if readers can't understand that you've got a life outside of fanfiction, that's their problem.
Anyhow, interesting direction you've taken with the pairing; I must confess, I'd been confused for a while about why this story was categorized as "romance" when the closest thing to that was in the form of the Rowdyruffs sexually harrassing Bubbles. (I actually thought you were going to make this BubblesXBoomer, just to prove that PPGXRRB can be done well if an author actually has some skills, but BubblesXMojo works too.) My only critique is that the chapter seems highly dialogue-driven, with little action, description or inner monologues, but still, it's a great read. |
 nickelodeonfan453 2009-04-15 . chapter 3This is a really great story, I'd love to see some more, whenever that may be. |
 Vicious Dice 2009-04-11 . chapter 3I like it. Mojo Jojo is my favorite character. |
 Invader Becky and Clad 2009-04-07 . chapter 3Well whether or not this is finished any time soon or in the next ten to twenty years, joking, I've really liked it and hope to see it finished. Mojo and Bubbles is a sweet paring, I adore that dude and she's so sweet. Anyway great chapter, Mojo needs to quit smoking, he needs to live for a long time. This chapter was funny, sweet, and awsome. Hope to see an update some time this year. |
 Invader Becky and Clad 2009-04-07 . chapter 2great chapter I'm staring to like the RRB a little more now. |
 Invader Becky and Clad 2009-04-07 . chapter 1That was very enjoyable I liked it a lot |
 Dracori 2009-04-07 . chapter 3Ha! When I got the alert in my inbox I was like "WTF IS THAT?! What is it? Is that an alert from Commander?! LOLWUT."
I was surprised this chapter came so quick, and thrilled too :D I loved this chapter. The characterization is flawless, as usual. Curse your brilliance! I'm only saddened it'll probably be a long time before you update, if you EVER update. But your life is obviously more important than a fanfic XD I'll always have hope that you'll update :) And it looks like the Mojo/Bubbles goodness is getting underway! HUZZAH! |
 BubblyShell22 2009-04-07 . chapter 3I had a feeling this was gonna be a Mojo/Bubbles pairing, which is cool. I really like this story. However, take your time in updating. I know how college can get sometimes, and it's important to get schoolwork out of the way. I've been there, and I'm glad I don't have to worry about it anymore. Congrats on graduating in a month!
The Bubbly One,
Shell |
 BubblyShell22 2009-03-20 . chapter 2This has good potential, Commander. I really like it. Usually, I don't like PPG/RRB stories, but this one is okay. It's really looking good. You are a good writer.
The Bubbly One,
Shell |
 Darkness-Bride 2008-07-07 . chapter 2Hi!
I love it!
For me, it was very funny!!
I hope you continue soon! |
 Aurora-Powerpunk 2008-03-04 . chapter 2Ok! I cant wait for the next update. Hope you post the next chapter soon because this seems like a good story with an interesting plot line!
-A.P. |
 xxbeni.music 2007-12-16 . chapter 2Aw, u got to continue^^ I wanna see where this is going, pwease? =3
Well then, byes! Lovely chapter!
-Gabs |
 Fangirl-On-Crack 2007-11-04 . chapter 1LOVE!I can't believe I didn't find this sooner.
I love this so much.Mojo smoking made my day,it really has.This is awesome.Excellent plot too. |