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mizgardenia21
2009-10-26 . chapter 3
This story is really interesting and different. I like it. I think the plot is decent.
FluffyBiscuits
2009-05-23 . chapter 3
Stunned you updated. Not a huge fan of this pairing but you write so well.
The Illustrious Crackpot
2009-05-12 . chapter 3
Hooray, Commander's not dead! :D Don't worry about frequent (or infrequent) updates; if readers can't understand that you've got a life outside of fanfiction, that's their problem.

Anyhow, interesting direction you've taken with the pairing; I must confess, I'd been confused for a while about why this story was categorized as "romance" when the closest thing to that was in the form of the Rowdyruffs sexually harrassing Bubbles. (I actually thought you were going to make this BubblesXBoomer, just to prove that PPGXRRB can be done well if an author actually has some skills, but BubblesXMojo works too.) My only critique is that the chapter seems highly dialogue-driven, with little action, description or inner monologues, but still, it's a great read.
Intergalactic Handyman
2009-04-15 . chapter 3
This is a really great story, I'd love to see some more, whenever that may be.
Vicious Dice
2009-04-11 . chapter 3
I like it. Mojo Jojo is my favorite character.
Invader Becky and Clad
2009-04-07 . chapter 3
Well whether or not this is finished any time soon or in the next ten to twenty years, joking, I've really liked it and hope to see it finished. Mojo and Bubbles is a sweet paring, I adore that dude and she's so sweet. Anyway great chapter, Mojo needs to quit smoking, he needs to live for a long time. This chapter was funny, sweet, and awsome. Hope to see an update some time this year.
Invader Becky and Clad
2009-04-07 . chapter 2
great chapter I'm staring to like the RRB a little more now.
Invader Becky and Clad
2009-04-07 . chapter 1
That was very enjoyable I liked it a lot
Dracori
2009-04-07 . chapter 3
Ha! When I got the alert in my inbox I was like "WTF IS THAT?! What is it? Is that an alert from Commander?! LOLWUT."

I was surprised this chapter came so quick, and thrilled too :D I loved this chapter. The characterization is flawless, as usual. Curse your brilliance! I'm only saddened it'll probably be a long time before you update, if you EVER update. But your life is obviously more important than a fanfic XD I'll always have hope that you'll update :) And it looks like the Mojo/Bubbles goodness is getting underway! HUZZAH!
BubblyShell22
2009-04-07 . chapter 3
I had a feeling this was gonna be a Mojo/Bubbles pairing, which is cool. I really like this story. However, take your time in updating. I know how college can get sometimes, and it's important to get schoolwork out of the way. I've been there, and I'm glad I don't have to worry about it anymore. Congrats on graduating in a month!

The Bubbly One,
Shell
BubblyShell22
2009-03-20 . chapter 2
This has good potential, Commander. I really like it. Usually, I don't like PPG/RRB stories, but this one is okay. It's really looking good. You are a good writer.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
Darkness-Bride
2008-07-07 . chapter 2
Hi!
I love it!
For me, it was very funny!!
I hope you continue soon!
Aurora-Powerpunk
2008-03-04 . chapter 2
Ok! I cant wait for the next update. Hope you post the next chapter soon because this seems like a good story with an interesting plot line!

-A.P.
xxbeni.music
2007-12-16 . chapter 2
Aw, u got to continue^^ I wanna see where this is going, pwease? =3

Well then, byes! Lovely chapter!

-Gabs
Fangirl-On-Crack
2007-11-04 . chapter 1
LOVE!I can't believe I didn't find this sooner.
I love this so much.Mojo smoking made my day,it really has.This is awesome.Excellent plot too.
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