|Reviews for Carrion and the Dragon|
| Ramla Okami 8/24/07 . chapter 1
thats so sad. really well writen too
| LizzieT 8/23/07 . chapter 1
Oh. My. God...
That was, without a doubt, THE best Abarat oneshot I've ever read.
You did an amazing job portraying Carrion's character. I think his tragic side is the side of him that draws people in, and you captured that perfectly. His emotions were excellently described. My heart was seriously aching for him.
I loved how you described the picture of Boa and how Carrion felt after Pavonine swallowed it. And Carrion's consciense yelling at him was a brilliant detail, too.
I also adored the part about him seeing the creature that looked like him. It was an excellent detail that you'd definitely see around Gorgossium, but it was great character development as well.
The detailed descriptions of Gorgossium's horrors and stenches were extremely well done, too. Bravo _
Sorry for leaving such a long review, but this fic deserves it. It was a more than welcome change from the slew of bad grammar, poor spelling, and weak descriptions I've been seeing around here. Hope to see more fics from you soon
| Red Stockings 8/22/07 . chapter 1
I think you've uploaded the wrong file here, it's the same as 'sweet dreams'