 Fenolpoke(FP) 2009-09-30 . chapter 9 LOL!
this fanfic is hillarious!
...anyway, i have a question!
you say that billy's 3rd fafourite character is sasuke, who's the 1st and 2nd?
I don't have request knowing you must've have a plan already, are...you?
AND boy, naruto is really funny!
i vote for authoresses! |
 Fenolpoke(FP) 2009-09-28 . chapter 1 THE HECK??!
boque is billy GF?!!
is this world different, or is this the cliche ending conclusion, boque marrying billy-kitty?!(sorry, i just like billy and hate boque so much) |
 Hoshi Gin Tsukino 2007-12-26 . chapter 8 ...why am i not surprised blue-san? lol
he does look gangsta-rish...lmao! can't wait for the next chapter... |
 Van 'n' Kim 2007-12-24 . chapter 8Oh no... Buddy, you make me feel very miserable. (sniff) EVERYONE POSTED UP A NEW CHAPTER THE DAY BEFORE CHRISTMAS EXCEPT ME! WHY AM I SO SLOW? (huddles in corner before calming) It was so weird though. Lots of my buddies posted up new chapters today.
I loved the chapter so much! X3 Teehee! Shino! And don't worry about the Shippuden references, they're hilarious! Poor Shikamaru... He's not going to hear the end of this is he? XD Fufufu! I can practically hear the cackling! Meh. But it's great that you got a job. Just that waiting part is what I'm trying to get through here... Wah... TT_TT |
 xTxNxLx 2007-12-24 . chapter 8LOL YOUTUBE HERE WE COME! hahaha shika is naked and has to have chouji hide him xD another funny chappie./ hope yhuu update soon =]] |
 White Haired Teen 2007-12-01 . chapter 4He he! Cute. They're all gonna die. I laughed a bit when I realized why cliche was crying when Asuma showed up. But the best part was, "May I brush your hair?" I died when I read that. Poor guy, I can so relate. I considered charging kids to put put braids in my hair back when it was long.
P.S. I haven't come across anything that would explain it yet, but I got this review that said I copied you on something. I just want you to know that I haven't read anything of yours before and I came up with the idea by myself (Lee killing Sasuke with subliminal messages), so I thought I should tell you about that.
Very nice story! Don't you just love making fun of cliches and puns? |
 Silver Ame Tsukino 2007-11-19 . chapter 7lol, you did Jarrell perfectly! (-Hoshi)
...Gaara's homocidal thing, kill everyone because it makes me better...
Temari's fan, remind anyone of Kagura from Inuyasha?
Kankuro...Naruka from Inuyasha anyone? Really the puppet thing reminds me of Naruka and his control over Kagura...
...we're done! (-Silver and Hoshi) |
 xTxNxLx 2007-11-17 . chapter 7lmfao soo funny haha i iwsh i could see neji in that cuz i totally hate him-.-... lmfaoo sasuke and billa make me laugh xD |
 Van 'n' Kim 2007-11-17 . chapter 7Yay! You updated! XD Oh Neji made me spill my drink laughing! ^_^ Well, for cliches on the sand nin, I think I have some. Let's see. Temari thinks men are dumb (Funny considering that she once 'fangirled' over Sasuke...)Gaara doesn't know what love is/ Gaara has anger management issues, Kankuro... Wait WAIT! I know one, argh. Wait, I got it! Ninja personalities are reflected in other characters! XD For example, Kankuro's like another Kiba... Ino's another Sakura... Etc! XD Well, maybe that's not it... But anyway, hope you update soon! :3 |
 Van 'n' Kim 2007-10-17 . chapter 6Hello friend! ^_^ I've got a few cliches for you! When an Akatsuki member is fighting without the cloak, they're going to die. (Hidan's immortal so he had the cloak on, even though it's damaged.) The bad guy usually gives a monologue on how they caught you in their trap, (yada, yada, I'm gonna keel you this way, yada) I thought of others, but now I just forgot them! ^^; I cracked up at the story from the very beginning! |
 xTxNxLx 2007-10-14 . chapter 6haha omg this is soo funny its goin on my favs xD |
 Silver Ame Tsukino 2007-08-26 . chapter 5lol...normally i'd be signed in as Hoshi but today i'm to lazy to change accounts...
Awesome chappy...poor TenTen though...she never gets any real background info...update soon! |
 depthoffury 2007-08-20 . chapter 4AWESOME! have Neji say yes to the hair thing. PLEASE! IT WOULD BE ONE OF THE FUNNIEST THINGS IN THE WORLD. excuse my begging. i like the story and I've just gone crazy. |
 Hoshi Gin Tsukino 2007-08-20 . chapter 4(blushing) glad i could help...and thanks for not doing anything to bad to Nata-chan!! (grin) can't wait for the new update...
Shika-kun was so creeped out! lmao |
 Hoshi Gin Tsukino 2007-08-19 . chapter 3(grin) go for it! don't worry about not liking to write stories...i started that way but i write stories and i'm happy to say i improved!
this chap didn't have much action so i'm i'm waiting for the next one with some anticiption...as for my OC you have my deepest permission to use them in anyway to toture the poor characters of naruto! ...except Hinata cuz she's my favorite...
o cliche! blue haired girl has a talent in the water area...like in sailor moon, sailor mercury has blue hair and she's the scout of water (most common referrence really) also nata-chan happens to be the really shy girl that likes the loud mouth boy...really cliche there...
this -is- fun! |