 LazyCatfish27 2009-10-15 . chapter 1lol |
 CherryBlossom006 2009-10-15 . chapter 1ohh my gossh!!
ur story was just awesome!! thats the best gift ever! ahha i liked the arm with the watch, very creative also!!
ehehhehe i love th ewhole story u know? i mean since i read the b-day letter with that ur poisoned so u must be there for the antidote thing, i said to myself: This must be good!...
and surely it was!
congrats! ^-^ |
 soserene93 2009-09-14 . chapter 1I love this story it's hilarious ! Poor Tim lol :) |
 Invisible-chan 2009-08-06 . chapter 1XD Oh, man. That was great. XD Never go back in the batmobile ever again. Ever. He's a least going to need new upholstery if not replace the entire car. This was pure awesome. =D |
 piratechicka 2009-07-02 . chapter 1Hahahhaa that was hilarious! I also love your take on Joker's birthday, threatening people to come, shiny things, and the villians interactions. Two-Face cracked me up! The ending wasn't too bad, I found it pretty hilarious, yet scarring at the same time. Way to go! |
 HoistTheColours 2009-03-29 . chapter 1Okay, so let me first start off by saying that I don't normally dabble in the 'Batman' category, (I'm generally in Batman Begins/The Dark Knight,) but I happened to stumble across your story and was immediately sucked into reading.
And I am so glad I did. This was, in short, fantastic. The dialogue was entertaining and humorous, and the overall story plot was just genius and, well, original. With a combination like that, what's not to love?
So, first off, I love that the Joker pretty much forced people to come to his birthday celebration. (I mean, technically, he didn't physically force anybody, but unless they wanted the antidote to whatever it is that he put all over the birthday invitations...uhm yeah, you get the point;)
Oh, and even though I don't even know who 'Croc' is, I loved the present he got for the Joker, with the watch--and the extension that came along with it. It was so creepy, but absolutely hilarious at the same time, just because of 'Croc's' reaction at seeing the Joker's surprise. 'Croc' acted like it was an everyday thing to get somebody a random body ligament for their birthday. lol.
And oh my goodness! I was dying of laughter when Harley and the Joker were inside the Batmobile and the Joker pressed some random button and a large net came flying out, capturing all the Joker’s party guests. That scene played out so perfectly in my mind, it was great.
Oh, and I also loved this part, it made me squeal, I must be confess! Lol. ‘“Did you get to do everything you wanted?” she asked cautiously.
He turned to smile at her slyly, replying in a husky voice, “Not everything.”’ –Again, I loved that.
And finally . . . wow. The ending was perfect, everything I could have hoped for yet nothing I expected. The dialogue with Batman and Robin at the end was just flat out hilarious: ‘“They did it in the car! That’s disgusting,” he exclaimed as he stepped away from the vehicle. “I say we either burn it or dump it in the river ourselves. It’s not like you can’t afford another.”’ –That had me busting at the seams with laughter!
Oh, and I also loved how adamant Robin was about not getting in the car with Batman. That was just perfect.
This whole story was just perfect, thanks for writing it!
Sincerely,
HoistTheColours |
 Embrace-Me-Eternally 2009-01-13 . chapter 1This
Is
GENIUS!
This is totally worthy of its own episode! One of the BEST Batman fics Ive ever read xD Hehehe I can just see it happening, Harley really did get him the best birthday present ever.
I love your writing
~Bec |
 Miss Malfaisant 2008-11-15 . chapter 1OHMYGOSH. OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH.
His characterization was great, and Harley's was PERFECT. I mean, this was ABSOLUTELY FUCKING BRILLIANT. The imagery and his thoughts and the description of him and their excitement and everything OHMYGOD.
Amazing.
I loved it. I absolutely loved it.
This is ridiculous.
I NEVER, EVER favorite things.
You must be some sort of God. |
 Xany Kaos 2008-10-08 . chapter 1Honestly, the absolute best Batman story I've ever read. You completely caught the feel of the show--it reads just like an episode. Only, y'know, with things that wouldn't've made it past the censors. I'm really impressed with the Joker, since it seems rare to find fic of him done well. And just as a throw-away, Croc's gift is morbidly hilarious, and man, there's nothing like a tipsy Crane and Eddie serving as the peanut gallery.
I have a weird favour to ask--I draw comics, and I need more practice drawing these characters (I'd like to start courting DC a little more seriously). I'm lousy at coming up with my own scripts, and could never do anything this brilliant, and was wondering it, sometime in the future, I could do an adaptation of this story, just as a portfolio piece. It would be a good challenge for me, and a lot more fun than most sample scripts. I'd definitely credit you on each page and put a link back to the fic when/if I posted the final work on my gallery. But obviously, I'd need your permission.
It really is just such a fantastic, fun little story. Pretty please? |
 mellathea 2008-09-30 . chapter 1lol!! So great!! I loved it! |
 mellathea 2008-09-29 . chapter 1 I love it!
So good!! |
 Ashley 2008-09-19 . chapter 1 Love it, Love it, LOVE IT! |
 Redmage2 2008-09-15 . chapter 1This had me in mad little giggles. :} Wonderful! |
 Phantom Kisser 2008-09-12 . chapter 1Love it! Hilarious; I've always wanted the Batmobile for my birthday. Too bad no one ever got it for me... |
 WatchTheWorldBurn 2008-09-09 . chapter 1Ah that was the best Harley/Joker fanfiction I've EVER read! |
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