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OnlyANorthernSong
2008-12-05 . chapter 6
This was so cool! I love this story- especially Shawn's excuse to get off the phone XD 'Gus...is on fire!' I love it!
KittenKez
2008-02-11 . chapter 6
OMFG That Gus is on fire thing made me .roflmfao.
Reali random... But thats what Shawns like so I think you did a great job with the characters .lol. Hehe!
You so gotta update soon you RULE!
...Please!

~*Kez*~
FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A
2007-09-11 . chapter 6
Ha, very funny. I like the ending a lot, too! Cute!
Hokage-sama Naruto
2007-09-09 . chapter 6
oh man i love this one that was so funny ith the foot rub, you should have cont. this on with a love story between them.i think you should start one from the beginning of the cannon ya know change some stuff up between jules and shawn. and make jules jealous of all the girls that shawn meets through out the episodes, and like wise from Psy vs. Psych episode.
ddamato
2007-08-25 . chapter 6
*Chuckles* Good chapter -- great story! *grin*
ddamato
2007-08-25 . chapter 5
Great chapter! I love how Shawn ignores Juliet in the beginning of the chapter. ^^
ddamato
2007-08-25 . chapter 4
Okay, so I understand the phone was on mute -- did he put Juliet on hold while he talked to Gus in the first chapter, or something [like that]?
ddamato
2007-08-25 . chapter 3
G0od chapter -- but I have one question -- I don't get the first chapter with the phone conversation and all... ^^;;
ddamato
2007-08-25 . chapter 2
Good chapter! ^^
ddamato
2007-08-25 . chapter 1
I'm definitely interested, that's for certain! ^^
October Sky
2007-08-21 . chapter 6
I liked your idea of Shawn's lying about being a psychic being discovered by Juliet. I can see that being like a season finale type thing...like instead of everyone finding out, maybe one person does. I don't think you ignored Gus that much. He was there when he needed to be, and when he wasn't there it was okay. Great story!
chevy hick
2007-08-21 . chapter 6
I knew she woulden't tail on him
and don't worry about Gus he has a way
of showing up in weard ways.

P.S. YOU RULE!
Han-Skywalker
2007-08-21 . chapter 6
thia was great! i can't wait to read your next story!
Saucy-Duck
2007-08-21 . chapter 6
It would be very cool if that other story where he's discovered, if it was the Cheif who discovers him.

Great chapter, I really enjoyed reading this.
Nyxelestia
2007-08-21 . chapter 6
I liked that last line about the foot rub. I could've totally seen this continuing about Juliet going around knowing Shawn's not a psychic, but it's cool where it ended. Keep up the great work!

~Nyxie~
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