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Reviews for: The Vitality of Being Eloquent
chronosthirteen
2009-08-30 . chapter 1
OMG, this fic is so damn hilarious! I ADORE that little Daichi. So here's my question: WHY IS THIS NOT GETTING MORE REVIEWS?
And here's my fav part - "I walked into the living room without a single evil thought in my head. Not like I think evil thoughts regularly or anything like that," You've just got to love this kid! Wonderful job! Wonderful story! And freaking wonderful OC!
Okuyukashii
2009-02-21 . chapter 1
Absolutely hilarious, yeah. Sorry, I actually talk like that. I love how smart Daichi is and, like, "So there you go. That’s what happened. With the clay. The clay that my dad gave me, which was his clay. That he gave me." So funny.
Great job!
jayanx
2007-12-15 . chapter 1
I love it, the line about the "villagers, guardians, parents, and person wearing a suit" was my favorite. He definitely has a future as either s lawyer or a politician.
honoo girl
2007-09-16 . chapter 1
That was so funny. Poor Deidara, he didn't mean any harm. Daichi sure is smart, and he should so be a lawyer! That was the greatest thing I have read all day. Loved it. Your style is great, as usual. And everything was just so hilarious.
Turrb
2007-09-08 . chapter 1
Some how I can see Itachi and Daichi getting along very well..
Smaragd
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
I was laughing very hard while reading this. There will be a smile on my face for a while. Daichi offering Itachi a chip was the icing on the cake.

I think Deidara x Sakura is my new favorite Naruto pairing. I enjoyed reading this story and A Temporary Madness. I'm eager to read more of anything you update. So, yeah, I really liked this story.
InuKeifer
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
LOL.Love the ending.
KiraKiraBoom
2007-08-22 . chapter 1
halarious! I coulnd't stop laughing! He's soo cute!
Fallacy
2007-08-18 . chapter 1
Oh, such a smooth-talker. He's so cute. I want to steal him. And put him on my non-existent mantle. :3

Very intelligent, too. xD

Sorry I couldn't beta in time. o: I'll do better next time!
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