Give me more. The worms are evil and they hate me. I want to see how this works out.

This is really funny, and I hope to see more of it. Think of the puppies that will die if the Mind Worms aren't stopped! And how dare Planet say that about his mother!

I wouldn't say that your story is too crappy. It would be interesting if you added Planet in as a character for the future series. Also, your characters are all a little similar.

I hope this helps, and I hope you find the motivation to make a series.

Oh, my... Truly hilarious! I had a good laugh out of this, even though I haven't played AC in ages. Maybe I should play it again - long live the Gaians!