Yikes. Like the surreal atmosphere here... very creepy indeed.

BrieflyDel, you've done it again. Shocked me into thinking that you are the most fabulous writer ever to walk this earth. This is... art. I've read enough by Stephen King to not be frightened by it, but, wow. Just... wow. You are amazing. I love it.

That was a little bit scary in a... crazy sort of way. Great job though.

lol,it is creepy, real creepy. but cool. or..ya...

Wow. That was amazing. Really, and truly fascinating.

Wow. that was amazingly well written. That has ,seriously, got to be one of the best, if no the absolute best, fanfics I've ever read. Amazing job.

Oh Insanity Creepiness loved it. *^_^*

(.)(.)**blinks** That was insanily well written...and creepy.

You should write more

S-A

You're right. very creepy and yet . . I like ite

I agree with your synopsis...that was very creepy!
What inspired (is that the right word?) you to write this?
It is written from such an amazing and...creepy angle that I had never thought of!
Brilliant as usual BrieflyDel!

*blinks in silent shock*
omg... that was so... so...disturbingly creepy...
Brilliant and wonderfully written...
but very... very creepy...
*blinks some more*
What on earth inspired you to write this?
the confusion that does, and yet doesn't make sence at the same time...
all I have to say to this piece is...
Wow.

*sits here looking quite gobsmacked* Wow...That was marvelous! Simply stunning! Insanity is such a wonderful thing...

Brilliant.

solarphoenix.

Ooo, might just have nightmares now

Ooo, might just have nightmares now