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Reviews for: The Dahlia
Pointy Objects
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
Oh wow. That was so...smart. And it was dark, but not...the bad kind of dark. SmartDark. That shouold be a genre: SmartDArk fiction...by Vena Grey. Anyway,I walked into this a little apprehensively, becasue I'm not a big Sess/Kag fan; I don't know why...as afore mentioned, I'm not big on canon either, so it shouldn't be a problem. Who know? Maybe your fiction will break me of that. it's certainly good enough.

What I've noticed in your writing, is that you have these little one liners, that are either blindingly hilarious, or just plain genius. And it makes me just want read more. Which is what I'm going to do. Right now. Peace.

-Pointy_O
TomatoGall
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
i'll review! loved the evanesence song, thought it fit pretty well...and i didnt mind the darkness of it either...^_^
WarningZephyr
2007-08-19 . chapter 1
Kind of dark... I like it. My name is Dahlia. I get called Dallas... idk why..
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