It's so sad!
But I like it!
keep it up!

gosh, it's pretty tragic...sounded a little rushed and out of character but hey, it's still better than most

i just read this other story and it had like over 400 reviews and it wasn't even half as good as this story of yours, talk about overrated...

but, forgive my rant, all in all it's alright and pretty good for someone almost 12...by the way, need a beta reader? i beta...ok now i'm really really sorry because of my useless ramble, i hope you won't detest my review

A Romeo and Juliet Naruto style

not that well written

how sad... tragic fanfics are imo hard to write, cause you gotta catch the right amount of emotion. i have trouble doing that... :/

anyways, this oneshot was good, it had a few spelling errors, and some grammar mistakes... but overall i wouldnt consider it a bad fic.

keep up the good work!

3.5/5