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| MallorieXmess 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuse:D I love this is't great! you should keep going :D |
| squintsquad03 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. I like your comment about Alex being whipped. So true. ;) |
| Degrassilover818 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseverry good could hav gone for somthing longer but still Verry good :P |
| Halfreck3929 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abusethe ending was REALLY good i liked how alex had paige scared but paige was ok |
| Kara Deen 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! You write really well. |
| Butterfly.Rainbow 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was amazing. There's few stories I've read that actually showed Paige telling Alex. You did it in a wonderful way. I really loved how you wrote Alex's point of view. I hope you write more stories :P |