Great story!

that was trully fascinating!

Luv from a Mutt.

SOO CUTE!

Nice job!

I don't think there'll be a day when I'll find something wrong with your writing. Seriously. I think you really captured each character's personality. Rosalie's reluctance, Alice's excitement...

AWESOME!
that was absolutely great i love love love it! keep going!

This took my breath away. Too damn good! I don't want it to end like that. :') It was to good, I nearly cried. So beautiful! I will sure read your other ffs :D

Me likes =D
Stuff Jacob (soz shippers XP). He is arrogant and annoying... sometimes. I (L) Edward ^^

that was a nice read!

please continue on! :)

That was really sweet. Just one thing though, vampires can't cry. So Esme's eyes couldn't be "shining slighty with tears"

Great story.

ello! I really liked your rendision of Bella turning into a vampire. I felt like I was Bella. I'm currently writing five Twilight/New Moon/Eclipse inspired stories. If it wouldnt be a bother would you read the stories I have currently posted? Oh and as soon as I can get on the computer would you read my Stephenie Meyer stories? Thanx!

I wish I was a vampire!!

aw so swet!

yay! bella's a vampire! it was sweet.. :)

that is...so good! better than I could have imagined sm doing! keep on writing!