Very cute! While I was reading your fic I found myself wishing to be the one with Stephen in the tunnel instead of Abby (he is so darn sexy! :))!
Like all your other Primeval fics it was incredibly well written and I think that you captured the characters of Abby and Stephen very well - now that he's dead (I'm still so sad about it, and I really think that Abby belongs with him and not Connor, who's just not mature enough for having a serious relationship - in my opinion at least) I hope that you still keep on writing Stabby fics because you're the best Stabby-writer out there!!
I'm really looking forward to reading your next Stabby fic (by the way 'Forgotten' is AWESOME - I still have to write a review for that, I think :))!
Dani

oh my god this fanfiction is awesome, i love it. good work!

oh I LOVED THIS! :D had my heart all-a-flutter coz I love the Abby/Stephen ship :) Great stuff - hope you write more like this!!

I think this is great. Very cute. I reckon you've got all the characters just right. Naturally, by all the characters I mean Abby and Stephen.

'It was big, bald and completely badass' I love that line. It made me laugh (Which, sadly enough, doesn't happen often. Wonder why...)

Anyway, a very good start to the fanfictions of Primeval, so congratulations, and please, please write more Primeval.

P.S First Review! Yay!