I don't know what to say apart from wow...humour is great (as always) and the slight angst (please don't kill me) makes this an amazing chapter...

Awesomeness for the furball! Please keep going!

Asagi-Okami

Kind of angsty with the whole fight between her and Shandra. I actually thought the PC was joking about wanting to join Garius. I guess Shandra was just taking out her stress out of on the pc?

Awesome, I enjoyed the chapter. I don't know what to say. The writing was good, I liked when the PC told off Shandra though I like Shandra.

Good. I am glad she's kicking their asses. I like her commenting on him speaking blashimous shit. Funny. I liked it.

Sand's remarks further amuse me.

WOO! New chapter! keep it up furball! The writing keeps getting better...the conversations are so awesome! WOO.

Write more!

I like the banter between Sand and Bishop. I like when he said 'it sounds better in elvish.' I liked when she beat the crap out of Bishop.

One question... Who are you intending to set her up with? I'll try to stand Bishop... not the paladin please! Maybe Sand? One could only hope, I love him.

Casavir sucks.

I liked your writing and I find myself imploring you to write more. You have their personalities write. Sand/PC all the way! Oh well.

I'll definetely R and R! You mean reveiw right? I love this! Good stuff. I am hoping for elf romance since I am an avid Sand fan girl but I won't get my hopes up.

I like your character she is VERY interesting.

I enjoyed this quite so much. Poor girl... being... well... I never would have thought Wyl...

Your writting was good, I liked the way she angrily interacted with... Too bad that she wouldn't have an romance with the other elf.

I must say I absolutely love this...The characterisations are incredible and I can honestly say the plot so far is terrific...also the fact I could not help but laugh at some points...is that a bad thing? XD

Asagi-Okami

love bishop and sand to pieces! shame the bodies don't go with the attitudes lol.

creepy but chillin'!

here ya go review numero1 for chapter 3! r&r folks!

Wow! Awesome story. I really like the character and the direction you've taken the plot. Please continue writing and updating. Just one little bone I need to pick. This is pretty nit-picky, but if they're at the Ruins of Arvhan, Khelgar should only have the Gauntlets of Ironfist. You get the belt and hammer in Act 3, after Arvhan and the Haven at Mt. Galadrym (I didn't spell that right, forgive me!). Other then that however, this story was very good.

I admit to be a goodie goodie so admitting that I REALLY am enjoying this story and your wonderful treatment of this blackguard is amazing!

You have made a blackguard likeable! No small feat, you deserve high praise! I especially liked the line about while she was a blackguard didn't mean she had no morals or emotions, very telling and introspective!

Can't wait to see more!

A great chapter WBR! I love how you've written Sand, I couldn't help but grin at everything he said.

“Know that you said that two hours ago”. Got a nice loud giggle out of me too. Keep up the good work, my friend.

I love this story.

You know how to toy with people's sensations - have to rub my arms now in the desperate hope to get rid of the tingling!

And Sand's comments as always priceless :-)

Ky