this is such a cute story. i love it. u blended the song in very nicely.

That was so sweet.

Aw...sweet story!

Very sweet!

Too sweet! This makes me think John is auditioning for the role of Daddy to the little cutie pie. Will Teyla give him the part? ;)

That was beautiful, completely not what I was expecting, far better.

This is one of my favourite SGA tales. I just love the image it presents, of John with his guitar and Beya in her basket, on that balcony. I keep seeing it in water colour glimpses, which is just beautiful. Keep it up, happy writing.

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I can't believe I never left you a comment on this...Absolutely BEAUTIFUL!

Soo beautiful...

Outstanding. We've been seeing lots of Joe and the guitar in JM's blog...would be nice if this *really* was a S4/5 subplot.

Dude, this was absolutely wonderful, well written, and very touching. Your writing is always a total pleasure. I still have that song I sent you stuck in my head when i see the title though lol

What a beautiful story. I love your writing and hope you continue to do so.

Absolutely marvelous. John would so help out. It's perfect.

I love the song; it's beautiful.

What was the question that scifan asked?