God, marry me. Why is all your fiction so evocative, seriously, teach me your ways O Master. *bows*

AW! Part 8 made me tear up. ^-^ That was so good.

That was amazing. You have such an original expressive style. It flows so easily. I'm just in awe right now.

Beautiful, short, sometimes confusing, little TsuSoka snippets. I've seen one-shots written like this before - a paragraph per reason. They speak volumes, despite their short length. I liked how you wrote the pair - there was angst, understanding, acceptance, pain, love...
Will you write more for this section? Perhaps even a multi-chapter story...?

- Maisy