I loved this! Wish it was longer though. :]

Wow. Nice ending! You're too good with this!

~Chica~

kool man u goota update amore

I like the way you left it open-ended.

O! I WANNA SEE JUST HOW GOOD OF A JOB CLARK WILL DO! I love Superman so mucho! UPDATE SOON!

~Chica~

You know, it's odd. I absolutely adore the shows Smallville and Supernatural but I usually don't read any fan fiction on them, but I figured since I loved your Dark Angel stories I'd give it a shot, and I'm most definitely not disappointed. Now onto the next chapter!

~Chica~

Hope you update soon! I wanna know what happens next

That was a great post.

Very nice story! Hopefully you will be able to finish it, got my fingers crossed. Keep up the good work, like your writing style..

Thanks,

Jack

I like it so far. Can't wait to see how the "fight" goes.

Sorry but so not the Lois Lane we all know. Some guy did this to Lois and he'd be out the door so fast his head would spin. and all his stuff would be on the curb.
I understand your desire to have the role play bring out their inner feeling for each other but the setup is lacking.

Again, sorry.

Your doing great so far!

I just saw Beyonce last night, so when I saw your title i was like 'it's a must read!'

I can;t wait for the second part!

Please do continue on.

Great start! Please update soon

Great chapter. Impatient to read the next chap.
Continue like this.