I love your characterization of Cloud and Aeris - how broken he is before he realizes the truth, and how she was mending him even then. Heart.

I like it, the idea that she struck something in him like that when we, the gamers, know that all those childhood images were wrong. Very well done.

~Beeria

Beautifully written; I makes me feel dizzy. :D

i really enjoyed this-- nice play on words here.