Totally thought it was Lupin and Harry,the Reveal was just heart wrencing

great story, i honestly thought it was lupin and harry. the 'professor granger' bit was a shock.

i think ron's the betrayer. am i right?

*tears up* I totally thought this was Lupin and Harry. You wrote this scene really well. I'm slightly curious as to who the betrayer was. And it is sad that Harry's son's life mirrored Harry's life with the early loss of his parents.

oh that was lovely! I spent the whoel time reading it thinking it was about harry but then that twist at the end! so god!

Good job.

Wow, that really shocked me when he said "Professor Granger" I was confused as to why McGonnagal was headmistress b/c I thought the story was about Remus.

As for the traitor, my guess is Ron. I'd also guess Dumbledore - I actually read a story about him betraying them-but it doesn't seem so.

Can I just say that was amazing? I kinda guessed that it would be Harry's kid and not Harry himself, but you had a strong case for Harry comming to Lupin. Loved it to pieces. As to the betrayer? No clue. I can't imagine any of them doing it.

wait

confused.

really well done. i thought it was lupin and harry and then - it wasn't.

really good tho, well written ect. perfect emotions.

not ron! just kidding. the whole idea is genius, and you set the scene and did your descriptions beautifully.

and i love the sixth sense.

was won won the betrayer?

haha i had to read the reviews to figure out what this was, but it was wonderful, either way.

DUCKIES

At first I thought it was Dumbledore talking about Lily and James. You really got me. Good story.

No...not Ron! No...thats crazy talk!

ack you got me though was so sure it was gonna be Lupin and Harry...ack!

Very Good

Shwenny x

Very nicely done! for a moment there I was about to point out that harry's eyes were green, not brown, but the ending rendered that comment useless. I love it!

I think it's Ron, just because i don't know if it's post HBP, and if it isn't then my guess is Dumbledore. I'm playing it safe, I guess.

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