who wonderful wonderful!
loved it! is there like a book
two? and why does Beryl and Endymion
have a love scene... that ** me off
soo much, giving her a rose... but at least
now we know why Beryl thinks endy is hers...
good story loved it!

Nice disclaimer.

I actually don't have much time to review right now, but everything is very well written! The descriptions are very well balanced.

Hmm, interesting way to introduce this 'mysterious woman.' Everything is flowing quite professionally. Good work thus far!

I shall put this on my alert list to keep the link! I'll return sometimes this week. ^-^

The Final Hikari
AKA Leigh of the Commenting COmmunity