Please don't give up on this. It's an excellent story and I don't find that many well written/thought out stories like this. Really, please continue with this. After a while I've lost interest in fanfics but I got back into them by reading some lovely fics and they were enough to renew my interest. That and I push/put some effort into finishing some of my fics that many asked me to complete.

I'm not sure how you are doing now but I do hope you'll finish this story. I would hate for it to remain unfinished as the years pass. And from my point of view I'm not sure if you've plan how this ends of not but it only seems like you can end it now in 4 or 5 chapters. But yeah, I know I'm not the only one here curious about the future of this story.

I know, I know, it's been forever since I reviewed and your last update wasn't exactly yesterday...I apologize if that comes off as harsh, I'm not trying to be rude D: But still, it's been a while...and I was recently combing through my profile and I realized that this story was somehow not on my favorites and I nearly had a heart attack! I couldn't believe it, because this story is just so amazing and I just /adore/ Stalker and Diana, they are such clever characters! Plus, the plotline is so...detailed, the whole thing is like one action-packed puzzle that you just /want/ to riddle out even if it nearly kills you (not to be melodramatic...)

But anyway, I just about lost a week of my life (not that I /have/ a life outside of fanfiction... ;>>) rereading this entire story and I find that still love as much as I did when I first read it. I still have such fond memories of reading this (particularly the chapter with Ratchet being held captive by the spiderbots) in the middle of my creative writing class... :) ah, such good times... I digress. I saw on your profile that you were considering giving up on fanfiction and that too nearly sent me into cardiac arrest! Please don't, you are such a talented writer and you have such a spectactular story going here and I, and many others no doubt, would just /love/ to see it finished! Though it is entirely your decision, I just wanted to say thank you for the fantastic story, it's one I'll always love.

(And...I'm sorry for just swallowing up a massive chunk of your time with this ridiculously long and really quite sappy review...)

Great chap, poor Diana she really is confusing, what exactly is wrong with Jazz? and what about the other Avatars what exactly are they planing?

... this is soo CONFUSING!!

update soon please!! ^__^

she kind of reminds me of river from firefly

damn you and all the cliffhangers *Stomps all over the cliffhangers and drowns them in the toilet.* there...no more cliffies...I hats cliffies. *points gun at a new cliffy coming up.* No...bad...

ek whats up with Jazz

One or two pronouns I couldn't understand who they were, and one or two quotes where I didn't know who was talking.

What happened to Jazz? Update soon!

Good luck on chapter 26 and on your other stories too.

I've been having a tough time writing my stories too, so you're not alone.

GAPE.
O.O

are the Avatars good or bad, cause if they are good they sure aren't acting like it, I hope Dianna is with Stalker :) . update soon please ^__^

I wonder they meant by the will of Primus?

Good luck on chapter 24 and on your other stories too.

evil cliffy
Where is Diana?

Jazz ran into a support beam! And the Wheeljack and Ratchet scene was funny!

? This story just gets more and more confusing. Though a lot of questions were answered. Update soon.

Hey, I tried to log in and review, but they said that I already reviewed to this chapter. Did you delete some chapters?

Poor Stalker. I love Diana's perseptives on life! They're always so insightful that I always have to ponder them.

AW :) I love fluff. jiji Stalker was being a little pervert :D . why was Ratchet operating Diana? did they find a way to save her? update soon please ^__^