oh my slagging gosh this story is likee THE BEST IT IS SO ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!! I LOVE IT SO SO SO MUCH!! YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB!!

oh my gosh i have been lookining for that armor part bout Sunny for a few months! it is like so entirely awesome i love this story!!

awesome story i loved it so i had to go back and read it again i love Sunny

*cheers*

I LOVE it! At risk of repeating meself, it's absolutely, no-holds-barred, fantastic. The back story was wonderful, and through the whole thing I either wanted to hug Sunny or smack him. Though hugging him might get me squished for getting his paint smeared with organic oil, and smacking him would have hurt me far more than it would have hurt him... oh well. I WANTED to, and that's the main thing.

I really do love this little fic. And unless mine eyes deceived me, there is a sort of sequel floating around? I think I must read it. :P

Great job!

This is Fabulous! I've always been a huge fan of the fact that our Sunny is an artist (so much so I want to do a series of oneshots about it at some point), and I love how you're doing this. Amazing.

I like the interaction between the twins, and Grapple and Hoist with everyone else. All around, very good character portrayals! And I must say, I'm absolutely DYING to know why Sunny's being so touchy about admitting that it is his... though if he wasn't, he wouldn't be Sunstreaker. :P

Also, the point about him drawing the 'Con... Extremely amazing. You deserve many and mighty props for that. Absolutely awesome idea. That being said... I must finish this lovely fic!

it was so awesome! i love it! man this is so cool :) i love it :D i heart it 4eva it was so good :)

That was really nice. I liked the flow and your portrayal of the characters. I think that you captured their essences perfectly from the show. The ending was a very good touch as well.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Zari

Wow...this fic is awesome! You wrote it very well and the characterizations were spot-on! It's a nicely written insight to why Sunny is so angry all the time! Must. Fave! ;D.
Optimus and Bumblebee: Cya next time! :) to :D.

That was spectacular! My friend sent me this story saying that it was the best Sunstreaker story she had ever read, and now that I've finished it, I can agree wholeheartedly! Very, very nice work!

This was a nice little touching story. Excellent.

This is an emotional (and artistic) piece of work! It gave a depth to Sunshine's anger without turning OCC on him, and then it smoothly integrated the origin of Autobot City...I mean, Wow!

What a spectacular story. I really liked the scope and characterization. I particularly liked your use of the Combaticons, those guys are dastardly indeed. And Hoist is the bestest ("That's our tow-truck")! It dovetailed very nicely with some thoughts I have been having lately about TF creativity, so thank you for the exploration of the topic. Your knowledge of the canon material is quite extensive and I loved the tour of antebellum Cybertron.
Your dialogue is also very good. Good use of the supporting cast and fun and believable OC's.

I would suggest you have someone beta it for spelling and punctuation, but otherwise, excellent work.

Wow! Just Wow! You captured all the characters perfectly. Especially Sunstreaker, who is incredibly hard to write. He's a study in contrasts that you have balanced perfectly.

It's nice to see a well done G1 fic amidst all movie fics, AUs and strange/marysueish works. You kept me spellbound from start to finish.

Oh, I already read it at tfw2005, but it is nice to read it again.
The last sentence always make me cry, such power, such beauty.

A wonderful read.

Gorgeous, and painful as well - reading the chapters leading up to the first art show actually hurt, knowing what was coming. The ending, however, more then made up for it!

And the twins stole the entire piece, of course. The subtleties you gave them and their own understandings really added to their depth.

Just make sure to keep an eye out for commas! You missed them in a few places, so you might want to go back and check.