is this it :( i was looking for a longer story
plz update:D

It's good. I don't normally read stuff like this (has any probablility of OCs) but I like this.

I'd love to see an update ^_^

that was funny, update soon!

sounds great so far,hurry and review.

awesome keep it up!

I don't like. I LOVE it. Please update!!

^^ Nice... only thing I feel you should watch out for is that Paulina is a tad OOC.

O...very good and very creative. I'm really interested in how this story turns out. Please update quickly.

Haha, I love this.
= D

Keep up the good work!

I like this! Contiue!