I love it. It's perfect as it is, though it is my job as the reader to request more *bats her eyelashes*. Your description is wonderful, I think the ending is fitting and I never considered the pairing, but I like it. A vampire and an immortal. They just go great, don't they?

oddly fitting...altough, this fits realy fits Wilde's original Dorian much better. (Who is dark haired. that's my olny pet peve of the movie, that Dorian isn't blond *rant rant rant*)COOL *.*

I liked the scene. But you could do so much more... There is a whole plot waiting to be used! Count and Dorian love each other, Count go and seduce Mina. Mina meets Dorian. Dorian is jealous so he goes to Paris on vacation to punish Vlad. Mina manages to kill Vlad with Van Hellsing's help. Dorian finds Vlad dead and swears revenge. During LXG he gets his revenge. What do you think?