 PrincessVamp 2009-11-02 . chapter 13Oh, fabulous. I love your writing. I've read The Silent Horse before, and decided to reread it just because I remembered loving your writing style and the characters (not to mention the plot) so much. I actually love all of your stories, and look forward to reading more of them in the future. Thanks! |
 Taechunsa 2009-10-21 . chapter 13Excellent story.
At this time this is my favorite of your longer stories.
While there were times that some reactions pushed believable characterizations and reactions, they were never so much that they ruined to story. |
 Shadowalker666 2009-10-11 . chapter 13Finally got around to reading this one. Damn but you write good stories, all of them.
I loved the way this story went and how despite its different path from the original you could still bring so many of the same adventures into it in a workable way.
Even though i agree with where you ended it, i still have to wish it could continue. Then i always find that i wish that with stories of this level. |
 Materia-Blade 2009-09-23 . chapter 13Whoot! Dammit, I really should just get it over with and reed all your stories. This one was just as good as the others. It seemed a bit of a stretch to me, but admittedly i've never been connected to rape in any way in RL so I can't say if it's plausible for Ranma to react by losing his voice.
So I was forced to go along with it, and I'm glad I did. A refreshing taste of 'what could have been.' That is how I would describe this story. An annoyingly abrupt end that seemed kinda like you were just getting bored with the story and decided you'd back out before you invested too much. But eh, it was definitely a cute end tying in with the Romeo and Juliet (If a bit out of cannon timeframe wise.) I digress.
It was three or four hours well spent in my book. Can't wait till I stumble across another of your fics and get sucked in.
Ja!
MB |
 Necromancer-Werewolf Maniac 2009-08-17 . chapter 13That was a wonderful story, tho at times I got confused on some of the character's thought process, I like your view on how the character's thinks about / reacts to certain situations.
I hope that your stories get even better and more interesting. |
 AiSard 2009-07-17 . chapter 13loved the fic, though at times it seems a bit too psychiatric (...lots of talking about feelings and stuff... not exactly sure if thats the word but nvm) well, a bit too much for a ranma fic anyways though i only felt that it was like that one or two times during the fic.
the ending was a bit wierd too.. just the Romeo Juliet scene, im gonna take a guess and say its something that happens in the manga/anime but ive never gone out and watched/read that in any kind of consequetive order so i dont really know anything about that.. for someone who hasnt gone through the source material though it feels really random=p
and while i can see this fic going on and on for quite a while yet and it had me somewhat dissapointed that it came to an end so soon, i also realize that fics that carry on in this matter, while very fun to read like this one, also tend to be inexplicitly left abandoned as the author fails to work out a way to end a fic properly. while i feel that this fic just didnt end properly with some loose ends still fluttering about and others cut off somewhat prematurely (to me anyways) like the Old Man getting his hand BRUTALLY cut off, i have to say its somewhat better than finding it unfinished ^^
anyways, loved the fic and a mute Ranma, while full of angst, seems to have cured him of foot in mouth disease atleast and gotten him with Akane which is always a good thing ^^ |
 chibi-prince 2009-07-14 . chapter 13best story ever!1 |
 scifinut64 2009-07-09 . chapter 13this story was outstanding, I realy injoyed it, keep up the great writing. |
 Tri-Emperor of The Twilight 2009-07-06 . chapter 13Great story. |
 ShineX 2009-07-02 . chapter 7I don't see how Ranma's Theripist sees improvement in him not hospitalizing Sanzenin. He never actually tried to make him helpless. |
 ShineX 2009-07-02 . chapter 6He was perfectly in his rights to attack her for what she did. Not only was she trying to do something to him she was on a property that she hadn't been invited in and wasn't hers and she tried to assault Akane. She got just what she deserved, and there was no dishonor in what he did (though he should probably work on the control). *sigh*, he shouldn't have even offered what he did, the idiot. |
 ShineX 2009-07-02 . chapter 4Not bad. |
 ShineX 2009-07-02 . chapter 3Nice way to put the story together |
 ShineX 2009-07-02 . chapter 2I can see that happening honestly. Nice job, I think it's a little dramatic, but since I'm not a rape victim I can't honestly know what they would go through *shrugs*. |
 Merme 2009-06-23 . chapter 13Wow. That was fantastic! It's one of the best fanfictions I have ever read, in any fandom. I don't read a lot of Ranma 1/2 fanfics, but perhaps I should change that! I really loved how you handled everything, and how Ranma stayed in character, but still grew as one, that goes for Akane as well. Actually, all of the characters. I really, really loved this fic. |