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Reviews for: Marshmallows in the Dark
See No Dum-Dums
2007-10-17 . chapter 1
Oh rhis fic's almost as good as ice cream! (and since i'm an ice cream worshipper, that's saying something!)
marshmallows!
Alekos Vahen
2007-09-17 . chapter 1
haha, that's great. You don't see nearly enough stories like this on the site. Again, a couple of minor mistakes, nothing that can't be taken care of by a good beta tester. you really have a gift for writing these, I hope you continue to do so for a long time.
Beeria
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
lol cute!
~Beeria
Madame Batolli
2007-08-20 . chapter 1
Aww. I loved it, Hyper! I really liked the comfortable friendship between them here, and how Aerith brings out Cloud's carefree side. As always, it's brilliantly written and your attention to detail by noting the little things like Aerith trying to reach her sleeping bag and Cloud seeing the heat spots after looking into the fire too long, is fantastic. Thanks for writing this.
Lucedeoangel
2007-08-20 . chapter 1
I've found time to review!(It's illwaitforever1 BTW) That was so sweet, and full of fluff. Keep it up!
SimpleNClean92
2007-08-20 . chapter 1
See, when I hear "marshmallow" and "resurrect", I think of roasting a marshmallow over a fire, setting it on fire accidentally, and then attempting to "resurrect" it. xD
Well, you didn't do that, but this was still awesome. Twas very fluff-tastic. ^_^
Riana1
2007-08-19 . chapter 1
That was sweet, and fluffy.
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