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Reviews for: Marshmallows in the Dark
See No Dum-Dums 10/17/07 . chapter 1
Oh rhis fic's almost as good as ice cream! (and since i'm an ice cream worshipper, that's saying something!)

marshmallows!
Alekos Vahen 9/17/07 . chapter 1
haha, that's great. You don't see nearly enough stories like this on the site. Again, a couple of minor mistakes, nothing that can't be taken care of by a good beta tester. you really have a gift for writing these, I hope you continue to do so for a long time.
Beeria 8/23/07 . chapter 1
lol cute!

Beeria
Madame Batolli 8/20/07 . chapter 1
Aww. I loved it, Hyper! I really liked the comfortable friendship between them here, and how Aerith brings out Cloud's carefree side. As always, it's brilliantly written and your attention to detail by noting the little things like Aerith trying to reach her sleeping bag and Cloud seeing the heat spots after looking into the fire too long, is fantastic. Thanks for writing this.
Lucedeoangel 8/20/07 . chapter 1
I've found time to review!(It's illwaitforever1 BTW) That was so sweet, and full of fluff. Keep it up!
Stairway to the Skies 8/20/07 . chapter 1
See, when I hear "marshmallow" and "resurrect", I think of roasting a marshmallow over a fire, setting it on fire accidentally, and then attempting to "resurrect" it. xD

Well, you didn't do that, but this was still awesome. Twas very fluff-tastic. _
Riana1 8/19/07 . chapter 1
That was sweet, and fluffy.
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