 teeenaaa 2009-08-10 . chapter 4...Wow :D
I loved this! I loved how you mixed Greek mythology with Artemis Fowl, how each side character (Charon and Eurydice in particular) had so much personality, how Artemis planned his own death to bring Holly back, how you kept the beginning vague and only let us realise later on why he had given up his own life, and how he was confident and purposeful even after death - this part really screams Artemis to me: 'Artemis Fowl had not died simply because. No, he died because he had a mission in death.'
Very creative writing, too, especially with your description of the Underworld - Eurydice's cottage, Hades and Persephone's palace, the tapestries of the great tragedies, and all the characters and details and stories and references; I had to try quite hard just to absorb it all. The re-weaving of the tapestry at the end was a beautiful touch :)
Thank you so much for this! One day soon I will get around to reading the rest of your Artemis Fowl fiction :D |
 Stecks 2009-06-23 . chapter 4this was absolutely fantastic, very well written - nice job! :D |
 TexasDreamer01 2009-04-24 . chapter 4well... what kind of people go to the Fields of Asophodel?
lovely story though,
brittney |
 IamLeahsConscience 2009-02-27 . chapter 4I absolutely adore greek legends, and I love Artemis Fowl, and I'm am positively enthraled by the realism you placed into the character of Artemis. I must admit, the modern twist on the Underworld was an interesting development, and I loved it!
I love the way you didn't forget about small details, and I enjoy completely every moment. Thank you for your rare story. |
 SparxFlame 2008-12-24 . chapter 4You are a genius. that story is fantastic. I love it! And it's not that sad... |
 life.my 2008-10-07 . chapter 4Wow, that was amazing... I was not expecting the whole gods thing to be good, but you really pulled it off. Nice job :) |
 midnightwaters 2008-09-17 . chapter 1Wow very original fanfic. I love how you described Hades and Persephone. The taming of Cerberus seemed a bit anti-clamatic, though. |
 Stargirl844 2008-08-28 . chapter 4SWEETNESS!
FLUFFYNESS!
I LUVD IT!
very good. wow.
Stargirl844 |
 SoulSurvivor23 2008-08-25 . chapter 4The ending was different,different is good... |
 Misglir 2008-07-31 . chapter 1Very nice. I am really appreciaing the details (like names: Charon & Eurydice). It would have been nice to include what the underworld looked like though.
HazelFaeri |
 purple kimono 2008-06-27 . chapter 4I know I said in my profile that I don't really like Artemis and Holly together, but this story is an exception. Absolutely brilliant! I really like Greek mythology (although I'm not very good at it) and you just combined 2 of my favorite things together! So, cheers!
I was also listening to How to Save a Life by The Fray while reading the part where Artemis and Holly give up their lives for Orpheus and Eurydice and it just seemed like a good song to listen to while reading the last chapter. |
 Love4Crosscountry 2008-03-20 . chapter 4nice, you are very good in Mithology. =D this is really well written. bravo bravo!
have you read the Oddesy?
i can only guess that you have. =) |
 blackdragon0 2007-12-03 . chapter 4I thought this was quite a nice cross-over with the greek myths. It's not that creative, but well written.
Black Dragon |
 Raven.Blacke 2007-11-03 . chapter 3did u have to know a lot of greek stuff to write this? |
 piratelore 2007-10-07 . chapter 4Lovely story :D I rather like how you incorporated the Greek legends into the story, although I wish I could have seen a little about what happened to them afterwards. Did they just stay there? Or go to heaven or whatnot. The re-weaving of the Greek tapestries at the end was a nice touch to the end of the fic. Great job |