Back on the computer after forever and a day and I find this. Awesome. Your sense of Calill and there relationship is wonderful and brimming with different interpretations.

You be cool.

... I already told you this, but I love how Calill is depicted here^^
And the whole "*shrug* Not yet" thing was awesome XD

Very good. However, does Callil love Largo? And does he return her feelings? I couldn't really tell, since he smiled after she kissed him. Oh well. As long as Maurim and Largo are together in the end, I'm happy. Can't wait for another update!

Never did like Calill. Not at all. Getting in between Muarim and Largo like that...
Rawr.
Anywho, great job, of course, and can't wait for the next chapter...OF COURSE. ^^

You did it! Yes, wonderful! I love the way you ended it. Ten thousand kegs of wonderful emotion packed into five words and a comma! Wonderful!

This yet again is the most awsome fic ever. I LOVE it. ^_^

... all right, that was seriously cute XD. The ending, I mean. Otherwise, it did grip a part of my heart, so well done^^

Yet another GREAT chapter of this fic! Though it was very short, it concluded very well. Please do another chapter soon!

He lives! Yay!

Found this link over at the Fire Emblem Yaoi Community on LJ. And I must say, I am glad I followed it!

I am happy to see Muarim have such wonderful fiction written about him. Largo, as well! You never see those two much, and with eachother, no less! And again, your writing style for this fic is one I admire; Clean and simple.

Overall, a nice read. Keep it up, we don't see many good fics anymore!

From Bellows Maris with admiration.

Ahh! Haa! He's not dead! (maybe) Yet!

I love your writing style. When I started reading I was like ' Yeah, sweet! Largo's fine and they're celebrating. Alright!'

I thought Muarim was gonna get some. And then the mighty hand of Nico came from the heavens smote this unlucky ready and did say 'NO,'

Ouch... talk about harsh awakening><
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continue? :p

IT'S ALL SO SAD! T_T But I take it that he is not dead just yet. Which pleases me. Poor Largo...update soon please!

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That was rather confusing. Was their moment together a dream, or Largo being attacked a dream? Either way, it was very good.