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| Gravenimage 2008-10-04 ch 50,  | abuseThanks for updating the story is getting better update soon. |
| doom-stay982 2008-10-03 ch 50, | abusegreat chapter man every interesting. so till later |
| Orpheon 2008-10-02 ch 1, | abusenice idea. |
| HinataHyuuga211 2008-10-01 ch 50, | abuselol XD Awsome Can't wait for the next episode! XD |
| DrendeSalkash 2008-09-30 ch 50, | abusenice fighting you got there. very nice. overall, one of your more action packed chapters |
| Kingkakashi 2008-09-30 ch 50, | abuseA good chapter. Kabuto saving Shizune was a creative touch on your part. I hardly ever read about Kabuto in a good light in stories. Your stretching the fight out with Kuro I see. That's fine, it's beena great battle so far. So Naruto's still got to "patch things up with Ino." Is that going to happen before or during the spectactular threesome?(lol) Keep up the great work, and I look forward to the next chapter. |
| Javie25 2008-09-29 ch 50, | abusehehehe even though kura is a freakin phyco he is still fukin funny well nice chapter and update soon |
| Moldock 2008-09-29 ch 50, | abuseThis story is really good, I like it. Please Please post the next chapter soon I hate suspense. |
| The Dragon of the Hill 2008-09-29 ch 50, | abusereally nice, sorry i haven't read your stories in a while... |
| swordbunny4486 2008-09-29 ch 50, | abuseexcellent. |
| AAAAAAAAAA 2008-09-28 ch 50, anon. | abuseheheheh no need to put oo much emphasis on HUMONGOUS etc. and u misspelled part. umm can u make an extra chapter on the...eh...threesome? hehe sorry, i dont know about the others but my mind is still half in the gutters... |
| ref346 2008-09-28 ch 50, | abuseyeah keep updating and will naruto ever be of help in this battle and what are those spores going to do |
| Rasengan Master 2008-09-28 ch 50, | abuseHey, I was thinkin', maybe you should put the...occurrance between Ino and Sakura in the hot springs into a separate one-shot, so that the people who want to read it can, and you might be able to keep a couple more readers, the ones who didn't actually want to read what happened and would have been content with knowing that it happened. Also... It would make your story have an even 50 chapters. If there is a continuity problem, you can adjust the before and after chapters, the exact number of them eludes me, enough to make it cleat they DID have sex, without actually showing-err... Writing the details. But whatever, it's your story, and a lapsed writer like me, who hasn't written in a couple of months, shouldn't be demanding anything from an accomplished- if somewhat chaotic- author like yourself. Laters, I'll be reading~ ~Rasengan Master, the lazy, often-condescending, ruler of every dimension. |
| chm01 2008-09-27 ch 50, | abusewhere is Kushina? or even better, is she alive? |
| KarelTheWolf 2008-09-26 ch 49, | abuse...that was unfair and cruel T_T that was the cruelest cliff hanger yet. PLEASE update soon. it would be awsome and good job on this chapter it is pretty good. |