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| bookcrzygirl 2008-08-13 ch 1, | abuseso, I read your story, then your profile, and I decided that I didn't want to get on your bad side. I need to re-read the Pern series... its been ages and I can't remember most of it. I am about as obsessed with Tamora Pierce as you are with Pern, which should probably creep you out. This was a really good story, I love the whole Beka Rosto dynamic. You need to write a story about Pern, there are so few good ones out there. I'll try to write one after I re-read the books, but I might not succeed. good job and I look forward to reading more of your work (but nothing you have out currently, because I don't really love to read about Daine and Numaire together and your other stories don't really interest me... nothing about Pern published so... yeah. |
| fourthelement 2008-08-08 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! I'll go check out the next chapter now... although it was good as a one-shot as well... |
| Devilishduck 2008-07-30 ch 2, | abuseI enjoyed it a lot! Bravo!! |
| collardog 2008-06-13 ch 2, | abusegood i would like to see more |
| collardog 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abusei like it |
| Ain soph auir 2008-05-26 ch 2, | abuseWow this is amazing. I'm stunned far too much to speak |
| xxTunstall Chickxx 2008-05-20 ch 2, | abuseHehe. That was cute... very cute. Rosto's adorable. UPDATE SOON! Unless that was the end... then I cry... (sniff, sniff) Loved it. Keep Writing, xxTunstall Chickxx |
| Shadow cat 2008-01-29 ch 2, anon. | abusegood good write more |
| anonymous 2008-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseit is ok. however, i think it needs a bit less dialogue, and more descriptions and action. this will lead to a better plot. you portrayed the beka/rosto relationship well. it reminded me of alanna/george. ttfn |
| Shadow cat 2008-01-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWrite another one another chapter please |
| RainShowerSunshine 2008-01-06 ch 2, | abuseThis is a good story but I think that Rosto's a little out of carricter. Also Beka has more detail in her jornal about what's happening around her. Don't get me wrong I really like it. Personally I'm waiting to decid my pairing for Terrier till the second book. I was Eskren/Beka till Eskren chosse Kora. |
| TrueRomantic 2008-01-06 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter. I'm glad you finally updated. I hope to read more of this story soon. |
| SnowAngel 2008-01-04 ch 2, | abusethis was really nice! :-) it's just what i imagined rosto and beka to be like together. i like how you kept true to the characters' personalities and pierce's writing style. good job! |
| HeartOnYourSleeve 2007-12-31 ch 2, | abuseThis is great! There aren't enough beka fics out there... |
| Adagio To A Wolf 2007-12-29 ch 2, | abuseCute. I like that Rosto got horses. They look oddly familiar. I believe George has similar taste... it was very nice. Please continue the story . I love fluff! Lady Wolf |