Good grief. You made me cry. Did I like it? Yes, in that it hurts so good kind of a way. Still, I'm left making up my own happy ending and at least you did leave the door open for that.

I'm still deciding if Lois gets to live or not.

I liked it. I would love a sequel full of tension btwn Clark and Chloe after that kiss.

I can relate. Great line from Lana by the way.

Good story

I loved this story!! Brilliant Work!

wow. nice story. love the chlark angst. i always want them togehter but i kinda like how in this story they aren't. are you gonna continue?

this was very well written and you really stayed true to the characters' feelings and behaviors. and you even made lana tolerable. LOL! i didn't know it was possible.

i felt bad for chloe but we all know clois is inevitable (not that i'm complaining, i love clois). but i can't help but feel sorry for chloe, who has loved clark so long and will never be with him.

it was sad how both pete and lana could tell how she was feeling and you made them very good friends to chloe. and you didn't make lois a b* either. you definitely have major talent and this story was made of awesome!

great work! :D

I liked the story, but the ending was sad, and it dissapointed me a little, but life isnt always a fairy tale and I guess thats what this story, atleast she got her last kiss. You did a great job, and I enjoyed it.

That is a damn good story. A little angst on both of their parts, and Lana actually stepping in with some wisdom. Normally I am not a fan of angst, but this one was nicely balanced and I felt like it ended on a note of hope.