 Lil' Miss Kagura 2009-02-26 . chapter 6*sniff* ...wow, I've read a lot in my teenage day, and came close to tears many times...but this is the first time they've actually been shed. |
 Sakura 2009-02-01 . chapter 6 this is really good. I really enjoyed reading it. Not only was it very touching but it really did make me think. I will definitely let me boyfriend to read this. I hope i get to hear more of this type of stories from you. |
 Corn 2008-11-02 . chapter 6This...was an awesome fic. I haven't cried like that since..FOREVER, lol. I really hope I get to read more of these kinds of fics, major Mamoru-bashing, but it's just the way I like it, lol. I hope I see more angst M/U works from you real soon. Keep up the awesome work! XD |
 chorusgurl76 2008-09-07 . chapter 6that was rather depressing.. |
 Lily Topaz 2008-08-01 . chapter 6 aw this is soo sad...
so very beautiful...
well done!
i love it! |
 Abyss1nian 2008-06-04 . chapter 6...Omg...that was...Wow. I havent cried so much in a long time. lol. And ive read some strong tear-jerkers. Even though i would never be as forgiving as Usagi here (at all!), and disagree with the fact that she was, I absolutely loved the fact that you kept everything in character. It was extremely believable, the way she alwasy and foerever loved him...that sounds just like her. As for Mamoru...agh...sick bastard. He got what he deserved..too bad it had to be her end tho. However, im just gonna pretend he would NEVER do that...i love mamoru...*sigh* in the series. lol
Great job. It was amazing. ^_^
Abyss1nian |
 roswellachick 2008-06-03 . chapter 6good, I am glad the he realized the pain she had gone through
wow what an end |
 roswellachick 2008-06-03 . chapter 5"for it hadn’t stopped raining for months… it seemed that even the gods were crying for her, crying for one of their angels who had broken wings"--wow what an image
"She no longer had his heart, she no longer held his soul… she no longer was his, endlessly, eternally… forever and always…that night she cried until her heart bleed with tears… that night she was no more…"--i think my heart just cracked |
 raye85 2008-06-03 . chapter 6wow, well usually i would be upset because they werent together but i am actually glad that that happened for the reaason is that so many yrs of cheating, i dont think i could handel that either, plus now he has it in the concious about her death being mainly his fault |
 UsaMamo4eva 2008-06-03 . chapter 6Hi, this was lovely, sad and very poignant. i normally don't go for tragedy stories but this just caught my attention and it was very beautiful. Keep up the good work! Of course I would love to bosh in Mamo-chan's head for even causing a hint of pain to Usagi. Baka. Lol. Anyway, take care! :D |
 hit60 2008-05-31 . chapter 5Can't wait for the next chapter~! Update soon~ |
 Kristine 2008-05-28 . chapter 5 OMG! This is so sad it's making me cry! Pls finish it ASAP! |
 iluvboys 2008-05-27 . chapter 5i vote this story because the ending is so close, and eyt i dont want it to end becuase this is soemthing i think everyone can relate to, and uve written it out so much, so true, but at teh same time the endings gonna be sad right?? jsut please dont make her die, cause that would just be heart breaking, even though im pretty sure shes gonna die, but anyway, i like your story, if u let me ill check the enxt chapter ver 4 u =] |
 Ann 2008-05-27 . chapter 5 Amazing story. Please continue! |
 Asha Satish 2008-05-03 . chapter 4 THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME! I love this story soo much. Wealth and money aside... Usagi's situation is, in essence, what has happened to me. So I can relate. I love how this story describes the emotions that both characters feel such as: love, neglect, pain, intesnse yearning, happiness, in such detail. What is even more impressive is how you can express all this AND stick to the story with a very moderate amount of words. This is a skill the all writers should have, but very few possess. This story shows no signs of being a rushed-through story. Even though it's only been four chapters, this story is quite tastefully well developed. I'm AMAZINGLY anxious to read what comes next!
You're a great writer, keep it up! Don't neglect this story and leave me hanging (and everone else) hanging. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE!
:) |