That was amazingly well written, just as I expected. I loved the way you wrote the phone conversation between Seto and Mokuba, it was quirky and really cute. British? I wasen't expected that one! But I could see it, and the last name was funny hehe~
"After all, he was the only one brave enough to make his presence known right outside the entrance to the dragon’s den."
I had to pause at that line because I was laughing so hard thanks to that ending. Oh it was just great!
Overall a really awesome fic, you should write more you're really good at it!

Wow, I really liked this one shot. It definitely has potential for something longer (if you are willing). But this was great. You've portrayed the emotions on Seto's part really well. I also liked the phone call b/c of the details you impart through it--that Mokuba doesn't like reading books for instance, or his naitivete in guessing that there was a tooth under the pillow. I also like the shock that you illustrate in the characters. It's all very, very well done. Great job!

actually there were like 2 typos, but that was the sweetest, happiest story ive ever read. kawaii!!

Aww, I like it!! I think you captured Seto Kaiba's character very well - the change from his usual self to when he discovered the joy of having the family he never had... And I love the scene between him and Mokuba. The only thing is that the aunt gives me a slightly creepy feeling when she acts so affectionate towards Seto, hehe.

Very well written. I enjoyed it.

I really liked it! The best part was your vivid descriptions. I love some of your descriptive word choices. I thought the "spider" images around Seto were very unique (the description of his hands, the comparison of his office and a spider as fearful, for example.) Perhaps some of the character's word choices weren't what I'd expect, (I never pictured Seto saying "bloody hell") but all in all I really liked it!