 WhoBellaWishesSheCouldBe 2009-06-29 . chapter 13Great chapter! Update soon:) |
 freyame 2009-04-29 . chapter 12I love it! I hope they catch Sylar... |
 ravenrocks191 2009-02-11 . chapter 11OMG
I've been reading these chapters all day and I ADORE this fic!
UPDATE SOON!! |
 coldqueen 2009-02-03 . chapter 11I finally got around to catching this update...
And wow! This story is winding up pretty quickly. I'll admit I wanted some more sappy loving Paire before it self-destructed, but the story calls for what it calls for. I'm amused that you integrated Mo's canon ability into the story considering how controversial it remains.
Definitely looking forward to an update. |
 YMH 2008-10-31 . chapter 9OK now you HAVE to finish this one!! im already caught up in the
plot! please, please, please continue! and next time you update I'll bring a jar of cookies just for you! XP
Have a great weekend! |
 hairymayojar 2008-09-29 . chapter 9Your story is awesome! And so addicting I have class tomorrow but I couldn't stop reading! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. |
 Liddella 2008-09-13 . chapter 1This is a great story. I just into Heroes and finished all the episodes up to now. I can't wait to read more. Yay! |
 faithfulwriter 2008-08-31 . chapter 9this is a good story. i was skeptical at first but i like what you are doing. update soon. |
 Haruka Minamino 2008-08-31 . chapter 9Whoa. Just... WHOA. I LOVE this story. I would like to read a continuation and soon. d^V~b |
 Iagus 2008-08-22 . chapter 9This world like totally freaks me out, with its subtle evilness. It's like Invasion of the Bodysnatchers, there's nothing outwardly wrong, but it feels off. WHich is good, since I'm (fairly) sure that's the effect you're going for. :) |
 monkey-monkey-underpants07 2008-08-17 . chapter 1Holy Crap!! That was AWESOME!! I can't wait to read more! |
 Iagus 2008-08-12 . chapter 8Congratulations on the wedding :) Not too much to say regarding the update, other than that it was nice to see one, and that I'm looking forward to seeing more. |
 itachixoxo 2008-04-11 . chapter 7kawaii desu ne! update soon! |
 StarzAngelus 2008-03-04 . chapter 7"If he gave in and realized her as his fiancée,"- That is the problem, isn't it? *sigh* Poor Peter... and well, Claire. :( Of course the world is not right because not everyone is allowed to have what they wish and such. I do like the 'happy' vs. 'right' conflict. Can't help but think that in the end, someone is going to be extremely UNhappy. *hopes its not Peter... but his and Clarie's relationship... *sigh* *
And Gabriel's true identity... nice. I like how you have him remember Rena and what happened.
Great chapter. I'm definitely excited to read your next chapter. :) |
 StarzAngelus 2008-03-04 . chapter 5Okay, so Peter has basically created some sort of utopia where "heroes" are praised, correct? Rena's powers bend reality to however she-- or in this case, Peter-- wants it. Interesting...
But again, its 'bending' reality, so it isn't 'truly' real, is it?... :P
So far, this story has been HIGHLY original and VERY entertaining and I truly enjoy how you have written Peter. His nobility in creating a better place, his shock at finding out who he is engaged to, his morality questioning the authenticity and 'rightness' of this new reality... it is a truly original read. And lol for the SuperNathan image. :P
Great job so far, and I can't wait to continue reading the rest and your updates. |