This is awesome. I got really excited just reading it.

WHOA! I REALLY want to go rollercoasting RIGHT NOW.
That was ahmazing.


Anyway, I found your reply (sorry, I keep forgetting which email I use). Really, I didn't mean that I didn't LIKE the ending, just that it could've been slightly better. But so could the orignal HP series. So could my Chem grade. So could my sister's blueberry pie.
It wasn't meant as an insult, if that's how you took it.

Ah.I meant "Prize Jewel" as in his hair. Because, ah, his hair was black.
...Sorry, but I get defensive... Eh heh heh.


Tra la La.

Oh, and I haven't read the seventh either. I had a friend who was going to eventually lend it to me, but I have to slowly wean off her obsession with it getting stolen/damaged/story-changed while in my possession, first...
Don't spoil it for me either!


Kai, thanks for replying!

wow love this fic but only prob its very out of character coz hermione doesnt like heights or riding brooms so i doubt she would like rides... although its a real cool fic :-)

Well done! Rollercoasters are definitely not something you'd associate with Hermione. But the way you wrote it made it fit well with her personality

This was really good in my opinion! All the sentences flowed very nicely together and all the way through it you just wanted to read more! Also I feel the same way about the storys that give away things about the seventh Harry Potter book.

That was so cool the fact that she is normal

this was an excellent short. i couldn't stop smiling while i read this. excellent job. kudos for you!

and i loved your warning about HP7. i'm surprised you haven't read it yet or finished it yet. enjoy it! and keep writing!