 Artamis Godess of the Hunt 2001-12-26 . chapter 3I LOVE this fic! |
 kochan1 2001-12-03 . chapter 1Lo there. I must say, I'm not normally a fan of Songfics, I'm most certainly not a fan of Rick Price and I haven't seen Escaflowne either. But here, for once is a fic that does justice to all three. For a moment there, you made me want to write a songfic as well. Just in closing, the only things I felt took a little of that magic away from the songfic were the subsequent chapters. I honestly feel that the first chapter stands so much better on its own. But well, thats just my 0.02 worth. Oh Yes - keep it up! My Rant. Ko-Chan |
 Melpomene melancholica 2001-09-28 . chapter 3Finally! Astig. Cool. Sweet. Write on! |
 Vash's Girl 2001-09-25 . chapter 3nooo!mmmmoooooorrrrrreeeee! you have to write mooooooreeeeeee!!!!!please???!!!???soon! -jess |
 dancegoddess 2001-09-23 . chapter 1OFF TOPIC I was just wondering why he was dressing like van....and if it's becasue of a school play of something from Escaflowne I envy you and your school cuz mine knows nothing about Escaflowne except a few guys.... I wish I lived whereever you lived just to see that guy. Anyways I love all your sonfics they're so beautiful hope there's more to come and soon :) |
 unknownnow 2001-08-30 . chapter 1BEAUTIFUL.bravo bravo... |
 Starry Eyes1 2001-08-24 . chapter 1That was really sweet, I loved the descriptions you put in, too! Oh, and I'm so jealous about that lookalike classmate! |
 Midnight Crow 2001-08-12 . chapter 1LOL...I hope your real "Van Fanel" reads this dearie. Well done for your first fic...and it's a songfic! |
 Melpomene Melancholica 2001-08-10 . chapter 1 Excellent! My 15 minutte wait for the page to load was totally worth it! Yes,my friend, you integrated that wonderful song with their lovestory beautifully. Yey! |
 Articuno2000 2001-08-10 . chapter 1Beautiful fic! |
 Alex Calypso 2001-08-10 . chapter 1 Great songfic! Normally I have to say songfics are boring but I liked yours! It's so kewl! I really liked the italics and the normal font that seperated the song from what Van was doing! It's great! Keep writing! |
 Phantom Angel 2001-08-10 . chapter 1OH GOD! it's so sad, i'm crying! and i know what you mean about watching the ending. i watched it too, like three times in a day, and i was so mad. your fic is just so sad and so beautiful. i love it, please write another chapter to it, with him getting his hitomi. i'm a hopeless v/h fan, and i was in rage when he told her it's ok for her to stay on gaea but she decided to go home. why? why? i was asking myself that. and then with that line "I'll never forget you, not even when i'm old." that broke my heart, since it meant that she was never coming back. which made me want to slap her even more. it's just NOT fair! if you know what i mean. ne how, your fic is wonderful, great, full of expression, and i luv it, but please write a second chapter! even tho the wish has been granted and the star twinkled, I DEMAND A SECOND CHAP! lol sorry for the long review, i haven't writen one in such a long time, and htis sensitive subject always gets met talking. great fic, i like it a lot, hehee, great job! two thumbs up from Phantom Angel!!!! |
 Tatsu 2001-08-10 . chapter 1 Awwww. That was so Kawai. |
 redflye 2001-08-10 . chapter 1I love this sooo much! I was a little confused at first but oh my gosh, it's so beautiful. (tear) I gratefully thank you for this beautiful story! Honestly I think you should write a second part but if you don't it's still a wonerful story. I'm adding it to my favorites. I loved the way you replayed every good part that happened between them: "Hitomi, I'll never let you.......You know what, we can see each other any time we want. We just have to think of each other...." Awwww I always cry there. Keep up the great writting Elle Jei :)
Rosie Redflye |
 GEO 2001-08-10 . chapter 1 cool i realy liked it |