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Pink Splice
2009-09-01 . chapter 1
Like this story.

Needs to be moved to P&P.
LEMONSKY4
2009-08-17 . chapter 3
I love this story, and I can't wait for the next update!
-LEMONSKY4
jkmk
2009-08-07 . chapter 3
That was so romantic! I love how he feel asleep with his head on her bed next to her hand! Very sweet! Can't wait for more, though I will be on vacation and will have to wait! Keep writing, this is an awesome story. Is Wickham going to show up? Great job!
arya19
2009-08-07 . chapter 3
I LOVE this chapter, though it is true that it is a little too easy for them...
I love mostly the way Darcy manages to go to Elizabeth's room, telling Charles that he must work.
I would LOVE to read more, and I'm glad you want to continue as well.
noukinav018
2009-08-07 . chapter 3
You made my day!! **claps**
I'm so happy and excited to keep reading!!
thx for the chapter! it was awesome!
pls update soon!! ^^ (just check on the writing. I'm sure it slips sometimes. No worries thought! I'm not lecturing u ;) )

**waltzes out with a doll humming happily**

^^
**thumbs up**
noukinav018
2009-08-07 . chapter 2
omg! I thought it was a one shot!! but this is sure better!! yah!! of course continue please!!
OMG! there's another chapter after this one!! (yah I just noticed it...how fool of me)
oh my I'm running to the next part!
^^ thx for the chapter!
noukinav018
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
WHAT?!
Oh come on. They both had a nice moment and then they say it won't happen again... **sobs and sniffs** no fair! boo I wish there would be another ending.
sorry for the ranting. but thx for the one shot.
Mrs. Dom Masbolle
2009-08-06 . chapter 3
aw... so cute.

I hope things are hard for them, like you are hinting, because even if they love each other this is the prime time for lizzy to set darcy straight!

please update soon!
sara71
2009-08-06 . chapter 3
I loved this chapter and it shows how much they really do car for each other! I hope that this will be a story with a great deal less... drama! I await your next post with pleasure! Thank you for sharing this with us!

Sara
HawkAngel XD
2009-08-06 . chapter 3
aw!! lovely! absolutely lovely!!


HawkAngel
HeroesBonesSNPB
2009-08-06 . chapter 3
omg! yay! awesome chapter! cant wait to see what happens next! :D
Chey1386
2009-08-06 . chapter 3
I'm loving it more and more with every chapter! Yay! I wish I had more ideas for my own story. All this fluff is making me want to write. Hurry! Write more! I NEED more!
Mrs. Dom Masbolle
2009-08-05 . chapter 2
aw i love this! And now darcy can ask Mr. Bennet if he can court lizzy and lizzy can slowly begin to make darcy see the errors of his arrogance... so that he still undergoes the change but this time she has a more active role in that.
HawkAngel XD
2009-08-04 . chapter 2
aw sweet!! update


HawkAngel
Lucy65
2009-08-04 . chapter 2
Thanks for writing this very lovely story. I loved the happiness Elizabeth felt when she was kissed during a thunderstorm...so sweet!
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