I really appreciated this.
It makes me think.
-Dru
And I believe that death, in many cases, is just giving up.
Then again, maybe not...
It's very refutable.

Death for one who's already died is simply life, but darker. Well, I'm guessing it's darker. I mean, isn't it some generally accepted thing that death is supposed to be dark?
Unless you believe in that heaven thing.
Well, this was great! Even though it was short. Well, short but sweet, anyway!
So, nice job!

'What is death for someone who has already died?'

Wow. Poetic. I loved it. Good analogies at the beginning. It actually sounded a very, very, VERY deeply deprssed, sullen Max.

hmm, well, for somebody that has already died, Death is only the beginning; the beginning of something new...

Wow, death by Drama, eh? sure, sure, it was called for, but... really, man, come on, Death ain't nothin but an illusion, makes everyone else think your dead. Then, your body (or what you can see of it) goes either into the light or into the dark, forever or never at peace...

geez... look at me, bein' all sage like...

Sorry, had to lighten the mood a bit.

o, vair vair deep! love the last line and the many semicolons.

jeezum
that was really sad. but really good.
man.

That is really sad and deep. Spine chilling and heart breaking. I think it's absolutly fantastic!

Good. Good. Now, I must ask you one thing.
Was Max alive? It was hard to tell. Even though she said, she had already die, it was a little confusing.

Wow, that's great. Beautifully written. I loved it... simply, the end. Hope you continue writing so well!

~WG

That's amazing.
I can't really say much else.
Incredible.

If I was the kind of person who broke out in tears, I would be sobbing right now. There are people that will say "no! the flock should be alive! and dancing under rainbows!"
there are people that will say "let's kill the flock and eat their brains."

then there's me...who says "how the heck do you come up with this stuff?"

I didn't review this one? Shoot, I could have sworn I've read this before. Oh well, it was angsty, but the good kind of angsty, the one that makes the reader really feel the pain and sadness and not just make them think "yuck, stop whining already!". Good job! :)

Emo much?

It's so sad!! Why'd you kill everybody?

Skye

I liked it but it was sad!

wow that is amazing. makes my fanfictions look like nothing.