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kaultagen
2009-07-22 . chapter 16
you shoud do a fic ware Harry and Aurora end up together.

I LIKE this story.
kaultagen
2009-07-22 . chapter 14
you shoud of made this a Harry/OC fic, I cant take it I want Harry and Aurora to be together. good story!
kaultagen
2009-07-22 . chapter 6
I like the story but you made the OC to likeabl.
ghostchicken
2009-06-21 . chapter 23
I've just been reading on through here. You've got a good story.

In reference to your Author's Notes, I have a few comments to offer... I was thinking that you didn't mention using the Blood Replenishing Potion because Harry had lost so much blood that he needed the real thing first. As for AB+ being "common" among blood types, I'm not so sure about that. I think what your other reader meant to say is that AB+ is the common receiver because it's compatible with all other blood types, since all the proteins--including the Rh factor--are present.

The most "common" blood type is O+, but the common donor is O- since none of the proteins are present--including the Rh factor. The rarest among blood types is B-. Anyway, that said, Harry could have received from anyone, but the drama is in Hermione and Ron stepping up.

I smiled when you had the Weasleys sitting down to Thanksgiving dinner...in Britain...but I didn't want to say anything because it's not that important. In fact, some British families DO celebrate a kind of Thanksgiving...just not on the fourth Thursday in November. LOL Molly loves to make big dinners, so why not give her an excuse?

Good job on the story, though. I have added it to my favorites.
GerbilsRunAmok
2009-05-24 . chapter 24
Yours are some of the best Harry/Hermione fictions out there. There are some minor spelling and grammar errors here and there, but those weren't enough to steal the glorious thunder your stories have made.

I especially love this fic out of all the others you have created simply because of the drama, action, intrigue and romance that you have melded together beautifully.

Keep those plot bunnies alive and I will certainly be looking forward to reading an update on Unconscious Confessions, which is doing remarkably well, I might add.

Oh and before I forget... The Draco Malfoy you have as an avi is drool-worthy. Mind sharing? *snickers*

n.amok
NeonAlchemist
2009-05-06 . chapter 24
I loved this story ! I couldn't stop reading it for one second!
Harmony101
2009-04-06 . chapter 20
I hope he's ok...
Harmony101
2009-04-06 . chapter 19
I don't like this I really don't..Something feels off.. he shouldn't go in that cave alone.. it doesn't feel right..
Harmony101
2009-04-06 . chapter 18
Hopefully he's OK wherever he's at...
Harmony101
2009-04-06 . chapter 17
Wow. Aurora better be glad she got out of there when she did although she did give Harry a fair warning about Ron..And Ron OMG that bastard...
Harmony101
2009-04-06 . chapter 16
Uh-Oh!! How long was he there?
Harmony101
2009-04-06 . chapter 15
He needs to break up with Aurora because right now he's just leading her on...
Harmony101
2009-04-06 . chapter 14
You know I REALLY like Aurora. She is such a great character. If he couldn't end up with Hermione I totally want him to end up with her in any story and I really don't want to see her get hurt Harry... ow don't get me wrong I'm a die hard Harmonian but still y'know...
Harmony101
2009-04-06 . chapter 13
Those are questions i would like to know...
Harmony101
2009-04-01 . chapter 12
No! Hermione stop being such a stupid git and just admit tat you want him as much as he wants you. I mean he just said he doesn't care so what's the problem...
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