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| disinterested 2008-10-05 ch 24,  | abusethat was a nice story. :] but... you said "She smelled just he remembered: of lilacs and parchment." but didn't Hermione smell like ROSES and parchment? |
| pfeil 2008-10-03 ch 23, | abuseAB- might be more common, but AB+ is only about 4 percent, last I checked. |
| pfeil 2008-10-03 ch 21, | abuseAmusing timing. I'm AB+, and just gave blood 17 hours ago :P |
| pfeil 2008-10-03 ch 12, | abuseOh, FFS. What's the point? |
| pfeil 2008-10-03 ch 9, | abuseGood, now they can FINALLY get around to what they actually want, rather than dancing in circles. |
| pfeil 2008-10-03 ch 1, | abuseRon, important? He's a jealous git who hasn't done anything useful since that chess set in first year. |
| hphglover 2008-09-11 ch 24, | abuseI loved it. All of it. I'm so glad you pointed me in the direction of this fic. I had tears in my eyes through several chapter, something that doesn't happen often. It was so real. I'm glad you played out every emotion, every feeling, and every tear. Brilliant work. I definitely look forward to more of your work! |
| hphglover 2008-09-11 ch 16, | abuseOMG! I knew it. I just felt it as I was reading. Dreading it. Asking the fates not to let it be. Goodness, I don't know what to feel right now. I don't know who to feel sorry for. You have me totally involved in this now. Thank Heavens the next chapter is there! |
| hphglover 2008-09-11 ch 9, | abuseFound the story and I'm loving it. This is a good place to leave a review. The scene between them in the kitchen was so hot and sexy, I was almost panting myself! Loved how aggresive Hermione was when she pulled his head back by hair so she could lick his adam's apple. Breathless. Wanted to kill Aurora, but I guess a little more sexual tension between them will be a good thing. This is going to be rough on Ron, but by some of the comments he has been making, I don't think he loves Hermione all that much. He doesn't listen to her, he doesn't pay much attention to her, his life is about the game he plays and sex. It will be interesting to see how you play this all out and I espcially love that I don't have to wait to find out since the story is done! Sorry for the long review, but I read all 9 chapters at once. |
| Hermione12XOX 2008-08-06 ch 24, | abuseOMG!! OMG!! OMG! It was awesome!! I loved the part when he asked her!! I almost blowing myself up out of happiness!! You are awesome...but I'm guessing you already know that right? LOL Well, I just wanted to say that and please continue with Forbidden Love... Hermione12XOX P.S.: Oh and could you read my story...I'll update it soon...and I would appreciate it! |
| Hermione12XOX 2008-08-05 ch 16, | abuseOh wow! do u have experience in this or what? gosh i loved the ending! even though i have to admit that im scared =/ Hermione12XOX |
| Hermione12XOX 2008-08-04 ch 12, | abuseOMG! my eyes teared up...omg! im crying! how sad?? i hate u!! jk lol i cant believe u did that! u r evil canival! but im going to tell u a secret...it was awesome!! Hermione12XOX!! |
| -2-Beautifully-Broken-2- 2008-07-18 ch 24, | abuseGreat story! I loved it. :D |
| laura 2008-06-24 ch 24, anon. | abuseWow, what a captivating story, I was on the edge of my seat and the detail of what different characters wore and the different POV of Harry and Hermione really felt like I was there. Amazing writing and very creative story line Keep it up |
| Lily and James Love 4 ever 2008-05-15 ch 24, | abuseYAY!! A Happy Ending! Love Harry/Hermione stories! This one was GREAT! |