|Reviews for The Moment It Began|
| peggy77 6/4/13 . chapter 66
I love this story and I also want to say thank you for NOT having any sex scenes and also for including the cancer scenes. My own mom died of pancreatic cancer, so I understand what you are saying.
| Rambkowalczyk 6/3/13 . chapter 119
When I first read the prophecy, I simply saw it was Severus who was to kill Voldermort. The born or reborn was definitely about him and I couldn't see how it could mean his son. However the born or reborn could also refer to Tobias as he was given a second chance and used it well.
I was ok with having Tobias shooting Voldemort mainly because Voldermort was shot in the back and didn't know of Tobias' presence outside the house.
| Shiro Inutoko 6/2/13 . chapter 71
Hi! I've been silently reading for a while now, but I noticed a bit of a discrepancy in this chapter and the last, namely that Severus summoned his wand while escaping from Voldemort. He also flew without his wand, but I don't know whether that particular magic requires a wand in the first place. Still, you've got a good story so far, and I'm looking forward to the rest of it.
P.S. - I've tried to look at some of the fanart you drew for this, but devianart keeps telling me the pages don't exist. Are the pieces all in storage or something?
| tnphysics 5/28/13 . chapter 119
I love how a Muggle bullet killed Voldemort. It shows that Voldemort did not take Muggle ingenuity seriously.
I am sure Voldemort could have cast a spell to stop the bullet, if he had considered the possibility of an attack from a Muggle. He also could have used a Supersensory Charm to watch his rear. However, since he thought that only a witch or wizard could possibly threaten him, the possibility that a Muggle could kill him never even entered his mind - and he paid the price for it.
| Arabella Lee Smith 5/28/13 . chapter 119
Great fulfillment of the prophecy! I am surprised some did not like it. I love it! Thanks for sharing your tale. A very appropriate way for V to die.
| Arabella Lee Smith 5/28/13 . chapter 116
I would not flame you for killing off a character! It's your story, and I am enjoying it very much. Thank you.
| Arabella Lee Smith 5/28/13 . chapter 114
I wonder if Dumbledore will find out what Narcissa knows and order her killed to keep her quiet. I would in his situation.
| Arabella Lee Smith 5/27/13 . chapter 107
Interesting way to destroy a horcrux. Very clever of you.
| A reader fan 5/22/13 . chapter 41
Thanks for this great tale! I do hope Severus and Lily can save Petunia from marrying Vernon!
| Rambkowalczyk 5/22/13 . chapter 80
I wondered if he was going to tell her. Knowing that so many members of the order were going to eventually be killed, I know at some point Severus would want to stop it. The only other way he could have done so would to make believe he was having visions or something like that.
| Arabella Lee Smith 5/23/13 . chapter 104
Very interesting. Regulus died young anyway, this way he has a chance to do some good, and maybe survive.
| Arabella Lee Smith 5/23/13 . chapter 97
I agree with your interpretation of how Snape felt about Dumbledore. I think you are doing an excellent job with the characters of Snape, and Dumbledore! Such an interesting situation Severus is in; you are doing a good job imagining how he would feel.
| Arabella Lee Smith 5/23/13 . chapter 92
Oooh cool, why would such a memory be in Lily's mind? Thanks for sharing this story with us. Great idea and well executed.
| Arabella Lee Smith 5/23/13 . chapter 85
Great idea an untraceable charm! I am enjoying your special vision of the Wizarding world.
| Arabella Lee Smith 5/23/13 . chapter 81
Thank you for sharing this tale! I am enjoying it very much, and am happy that it is finished, so I can go all the way to the end without waiting.