Uh, WHAT THE **, thats not right, they took him to his mothers hanging body, WHAT THE **? Hello? protocal? Dumbledore is an idiot, that could tramatis snape to suicide himself, seriously? I mean, SERIOUSLY?

god severus is so emotional and snappy, I thought he got a better hold of that when he grew up, also why is he ** up all the time, this is his CHANCE, why is he wallowing and misrible!!1

Absolutely LOVED the manner of Voldie's death. I laughed out loud, what a twist! And I'm so glad Tobias proved himself and the prophecy was still fulfilled, just in a little bit of an unexpected way...

You said: You may be wondering why the cup wasn't yet at Gringotts. It's plausable that Bellatrix didn't hide it there right away (and put the charm on it). I think it possible that it was only hidden there once Voldemort was resurrected, as he would have been ever more careful with where he was hiding his Horcruxes. If Lucius Malfoy was in possession of the diary (assuming he kept it in his house) and didn't realize its value, it's possible the same could be said of Bellatrix.

I will give you your last point and say that the cup not being in Gringotts has some points (not to mention being vital to your plot ;P ) but you should reconsider your thoughts on when it was (or would have been) placed in the bank. Post-ressurection the Lestranges were criminals and, like Sirius, would have had some problems just casually walking into the bank. Remember, the goblins weren't exactly allies to the Dark Lord.

Sorry, totally nothing to do with your fic (which I love, BTW) but I just wanted to point this out.

Ta,
Minara

Yo, this is without a doubt the greatest fic I have ever read ever! I must admit I’m sad to see it end as once I started to read it I couldn’t stop. You are an extremely gifted writer; I mean I even cried slightly at Peter’s death how the hell you made Peter’s death said still amazes me. It’s a shame you didn’t go in to detail about what Severus was doing now, as I always thought he would become a famous healer I mean he found a cure for a new curse in three days. I’m surprised him a Lilly didn’t have more children but still a great story and still a little sad the rides over.

P.S. Love how Voldemort died simply brilliant, anyway in a bit.

different and cool. i love it! go snape/lily!

I was getting to be very fond of... that poor fellow you killed off. It's sad to see him go; not many fics represent him realistically, and I enjoy seeing new characters, especially redeemable ones. He was pathetic, but he was nice enough, and it's too bad you killed him off.

Otherwise, good fic. Surely, though, with your absolute multitude of reviews, you wouldn't need to hear that from me.

I remember when I gave up fanfiction months ago that I would miss the ending of this fic, which disappointed me. I really loved this fic, but I just did not have enough time to keep up. Now that I've started reading again, I just had to come back to this one. I'm so glad I did. You are an exceptional writer. I was never a fan of AUs, but I just think this fic is amazing. You have the characters down perfectly in my opinion. I read your author's notes about how people had problems with Dumbledore, Severus and Sirius, but I think they are all spot-on. I love how several small changes changed everything as well. Most of all, I love that Petunia marries Sirius. I think that is just brilliant. I was disappointed that you said you would never do a sequel because I'm definitely interested in a next gen fic. I would love to see how Harry Potter can be Harry Potter without Voldemort. I see a lot more arrogance on his part. And Ron and Ginny as twins? Crazy. I'd also love to see what Draco becomes. Then there's the non-canons. It's all just great and I would love to see your take on it. But I won't beg or whine for a sequel because I'm sure enough people have done that already. :) I just want you to know that you are truly gifted as a writer and I hope you continue with your talent.

Okay, so I just started re-reading this fic after giving up fanfiction for months and months. I was going to wait until the end of the fic to review, but I just had to do it now. Honestly, I loved your end to Voldemort. My only response was: "Holy f*ing s*" I thought it was remarkably clever. And now, I'm going to finish this fic and leave a much better review at the end. :)

The wandless magic here was a nice touch, but didn't Snape already accomplish that once under emergency conditions when trying to get away from Voldemort?

I've been reading this. I can't believe its finally over. This was... an incredible story. Truly brilliant, and I absolutely adored it.
x Smaginn

I love the story, but I would have loved to find out what houses the kids were in.

I've read a lot of time travel fics, but this is the first I've seen with Snape going back.

The first chapter is definitely a grabber.

aw great ending!

Excellent ending! I love that Tobias killed Voldy- brilliant idea and better than mine. I can't believe you killed Arthur.= No Ginny! I'm sure she would have appretiated life even without Harry. that was mean. But I'm glad Sirius gets to live.