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| Tiniwiel 2007-09-18 ch 1,  | abuseThis is such an adorable story! I love the idea of Ryan/Kelsi, especially since HSM2 shows them as friends, whereas in HSM they were just nice to each other, a hint at a friendship. I think you did a great job keeping everyone in character and I hope you write more of this pairing! |
| horsefly 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseAw, poor Ryan :-( I've always thought Ryan/Kelsi made a good couple. I think a 3rd movie would be ok if they got all the cast back, and most importantly, stopped there! (a 3rd and *final* movie!) |
| dreamer 3097 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abusethis is good |
| Quote Mistress 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseaww poor ryan. i love this coupling! you did a very good job on ryan's character. it was a great read! |
| midnight972 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI was also thinking of doing something like this, thank goodness you beat me to it,I wouldn't have ever made them so in character^^ great job, I usally don't brother reading oneshots, but this one caught my eye^^ right more soon please |
| somerdaye 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abusethat was amazing! and you had ryan so in character ;) |
| Aki and Tenshi 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseIt was sad, but cute. A doomed relationship! I love Ryan, I liked how you wrote him. |
| xMrsJonasx 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abusei thought it was cute |
| TehFuzzyPenguin 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI like this. I like that it isn't explicitly romantic. I like that they're not like best friends or anything. They're more like--acquaintances that have each other's backs. And they're wonderfully in character. It's wonderful |
| E.S Hart 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseOh I do adore Ryelsi! They should have ended up together in the end. Especially since Martha and Jason were both pretty pointless characters, just around to give them both someone to end up with. You rock. Keep up the good work. :) |