Reviews for Ocean Girl : Virtual Season 5

Reviews for: Ocean Girl : Virtual Season 5
oil 7/12/10 . chapter 1 Great! Youve really done a great job! This plot is quite interesting. I could really imagine the characters/the actors say or do this while reading. The beginning is very funny, I would like to see this on TV! A nice thought that Jason and Neri are finally together during the season and not just in the last episode... The story about this new secret in the spaceship really does have potential for a new season. I hope you will go on!
elli wilson 11/26/03 . chapter 2 hey pretty good 4 a beginner. r u still writing these? next chapter i reckon u should do something w/ brett & the 2 grls-Cass gets jealous or something. by the way where's sally-anne? she should figure in this 2.
mmcandygoodness 3/26/03 . chapter 2 I LOVE OCEAN GIRL! i really love the way the story is going i know it's been forever but PLEASE come back with more!
christyanne 12/31/01 . chapter 1 not just for a highschooler, but in general, you have a great talent for words and writing. I'm normally against Neri/Jason fics (In the US, the 4th season was never aired so I don't know what happened in it. I've pieced together most of the story from websights and such, though) but this was actually very realistically done, so I may change my mind about the whole human/alien thing. haha. I like how you keep Brett so much in character and treat him as a major one. I'm looking forward to seeing how things go on cleanup. You shouldn't be so critical of yourself. You're story's beautiful and I'm clicking on the second part as soon as I'm done this review. Keep writing (and inspiring) for all OG fans out here. There are more of us then you realize who see this as a godsend. If you ever want any help, just let me know. (Although ur doing better then I ever could on ur own). Good Luck. Christyanne
WOW 10/4/01 . chapter 2 MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
MacGyverMagic 9/1/01 . chapter 1 There are some spelling errors here. "under foot" should be under her feet. But I found the opening scene with Brett and Jason extremely funny. You shouldn't worry that much. There is one more suggestion I would like to make. Name your story virtual fifth season and import the episodes as chapters with episode titles. To me that would be much more appealing. That, and if your stories have to be read together you are obligated to use chaptering. If you need help just mail me. I would love to help! Great job!
kelly 8/30/01 . chapter 1 the more "Ocean Girl", the better. i like the way u write, please continue! Brett & Cass are so funny; i luv them!
Cindy 8/30/01 . chapter 1 Good job. Hope to see more of it soon! :)
codi 8/28/01 . chapter 1 great please keep going
your cute little sister 8/11/01 . chapter 1 it was good for what i read but since i don't know much about the show i cant say it was the best thing i've ever read, but it was nifty enough to go back and read the next part

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