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| whoeverIamloves- 2008-07-29 ch 3,  | abuseI like this so far. I'm not generally a fan of yaoi, but the actual plot here is really intriguing so I got past it. I can't wait to see what kind of stuff you have in store for Genma! Poor guy. Oh well...Shizune gets to rescue him, right? :D |
| I Can Hear the Sea 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abusePulverized internal organs? That is creepy. |
| INUGIRL 2007-11-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseNICE JOB!!UPDATE SOON!! |
| Autum 2007-10-14 ch 3, anon. | abuseHaving just reread the first chapter, I take that back. I do enjoy your characterizations - Shikaku's in particular. This third chapter is simply more plot heavy. |
| Autum 2007-10-14 ch 3, anon. | abuseWell. Nothing like a cliffhanger to start the night off right! But I must say that so far I am enjoying the plot - i'm not so emotionally invested in the characters though. But I do want to find out what happens next! |
| La Loba de Mibu 2007-10-09 ch 3, | abuse*Trembles with anticipation* Omg, that is an evil cliffhanger, but now I can't wait to read more of this! I've been reading the RPG Scarlet Spiral, and totally fell in love with your writing, so I just had to come and check out ur account. Turns out you've written one of my all time favorite KakaIru fics: It's Nothing. (For which I'm still desperately hoping for an ending someday, by the way!)Anywayz, I love ur characterizations. Teal nails, lol. I really liked the portrayal of Genma and Raidou's relationship; very sweet, and cute. Well, awesome plot so far, I hope to see an update soon! ~La Loba |
| silenced lambs 2007-09-28 ch 3, | abuseOh, my favourite kind of Naruto fanfic. Entertaining, expands canon, feels like canon and in character. I look forward to reading more of this fic, it's really not getting the attention it deserves. |
| nobiki 2007-09-03 ch 3, | abuseargh! and it was going so well, too. you have me clinging to my keyboard, chewing my fingers. well done! |
| a 2007-09-02 ch 3, anon. | abusei like! i like a lot! as always, very well written :) |
| Kaja 2007-09-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseNENE! This is so exciting! GLE It's so good to see new Genma stuff from you, and I can tell this one is going to. be. so. awesome. I'm dying for the next chapter! *_* |
| scorch66 2007-09-01 ch 3, | abuseNo, a cliffhanger! *want to know what's going to happen next* |
| Jade Raven 2007-08-31 ch 2, | abuseyay! I like this story as well! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| scorch66 2007-08-21 ch 2, | abuseVery intriguing...I just hope that it doesn't end with a characters death. Anyways, keep up the great work & update soon!;) |
| probablynotreturning 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseShukaku is wonderful in this. He's so well-done. I also appreciate your Hiashi. He's a true Hyuuga main-branch type, yet he's not a complete jerk. This is also an excellent way to set up a story. I'd rather read about previous events through dialog between other characters than have to read a narrative with block paragraph after block paragraph describing the event. This is so well-written, and I hope to see this continue. ^_^ |
| probablynotreturning 2007-08-21 ch 2, | abuseO! I can't wait to see what happens with this. The premise is good, and I love the way you've characterized everyone thus far. I like how you actually gave us what the mission scroll said verbatim. And now... because a wonderfully-written story like this deserves many many many reviews and I see you sadly have none, I'll go back and comment on the first chapter. ^_^ |