Is there anymore to this series??

I like this so far. I'm not generally a fan of yaoi, but the actual plot here is really intriguing so I got past it. I can't wait to see what kind of stuff you have in store for Genma! Poor guy. Oh well...Shizune gets to rescue him, right? :D

Pulverized internal organs?

That is creepy.

NICE JOB!!UPDATE SOON!!

Having just reread the first chapter, I take that back. I do enjoy your characterizations - Shikaku's in particular. This third chapter is simply more plot heavy.

Well. Nothing like a cliffhanger to start the night off right! But I must say that so far I am enjoying the plot - i'm not so emotionally invested in the characters though. But I do want to find out what happens next!

*Trembles with anticipation* Omg, that is an evil cliffhanger, but now I can't wait to read more of this! I've been reading the RPG Scarlet Spiral, and totally fell in love with your writing, so I just had to come and check out ur account. Turns out you've written one of my all time favorite KakaIru fics: It's Nothing. (For which I'm still desperately hoping for an ending someday, by the way!)Anywayz, I love ur characterizations. Teal nails, lol. I really liked the portrayal of Genma and Raidou's relationship; very sweet, and cute. Well, awesome plot so far, I hope to see an update soon! ~La Loba

Oh, my favourite kind of Naruto fanfic. Entertaining, expands canon, feels like canon and in character. I look forward to reading more of this fic, it's really not getting the attention it deserves.

argh! and it was going so well, too. you have me clinging to my keyboard, chewing my fingers. well done!

i like! i like a lot!
as always, very well written :)

NENE! This is so exciting! GLE It's so good to see new Genma stuff from you, and I can tell this one is going to. be. so. awesome. I'm dying for the next chapter! *_*

No, a cliffhanger! *want to know what's going to happen next*

yay! I like this story as well! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Very intriguing...I just hope that it doesn't end with a characters death. Anyways, keep up the great work & update soon!;)

Shukaku is wonderful in this. He's so well-done. I also appreciate your Hiashi. He's a true Hyuuga main-branch type, yet he's not a complete jerk. This is also an excellent way to set up a story. I'd rather read about previous events through dialog between other characters than have to read a narrative with block paragraph after block paragraph describing the event.

This is so well-written, and I hope to see this continue. ^_^