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| writerchick13 2008-10-07 ch 21,  | abuseaw, that was so sweet! good chapter, update soon! |
| the-lionness 2008-10-07 ch 21, | abuseI think it's very cute how you made Draco into a virgin. You really are trying to get him away from his canon role so more power to you. The only thing that I am going to recommend is that you break up the paragraphs where the sex scene is. They're very crammed and it makes it tedious to read. I hope that the best comes out for you and your family. Good luck and God bless. |
| Nikki-4 2008-10-07 ch 21, | abuseIt was sweet. I can't wait to find out what happens when they go on break. I hope you post more. Have a fantastic week. =) |
| JessieJewelsPrincessOfDarkn... 2008-10-06 ch 21, | abuseoh that's so gorgeous! how lovely. great story! update soon ciao jessie xoxo |
| Addicted Weasley 2008-10-06 ch 21, | abuseOne of the best stories. |
| Fnicks-Gurlz 2008-10-05 ch 21, | abuseaw, how cute! |
| Jenn Hoffmann 2008-10-04 ch 21, | abuseWow. That WAS quite a way to end the night! Awesome description of the meal and the common room! Bravo!~Jenn |
| aerochick06 2008-10-04 ch 21, | abuseperfect as usual! can't wait till the new story comes..if i may ask what genre> |
| kyri17 2008-10-04 ch 21, | abusei loved it and cant wait to read more! Im also sorry to hear about your children :(( |
| Elven at Heart 2008-10-04 ch 21, | abuseThis was a really great chapter... Hope to see another update soon! Elven at Heart |
| kazfeist 2008-10-04 ch 21, | abuseA lovely night for them both...and I hope your RL issues resolve favorably...odd that the court would do that, particularly if they have evidence to the contrary. All good thoughts... :D |
| Marble Staircases 2008-10-04 ch 21, | abuseFinally :D And I hope things work out for your family. Praying for you! |
| swfap88 2008-10-04 ch 21, | abusegreat chapter |
| Lady Sapphirea 2008-10-04 ch 21, | abusewow. he's a virgin. lol. update soon and great job. |
| spikeecat 2008-10-04 ch 21, | abuseWoo-hoo. That chapter was definitely worth the wait. I hope everything turns out alright with your family and I'll be patiently awaiting the next chapter and your next story. |